Another really good chapter, good to see this story getting some well diserved attention now that it has 34 likes.

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Thank you Night

38 likes as of now, let's keep them coming!

Yikes on that warmongering slip. Considering what ponies might have been through themselves and from what we've been told it feels to me the ponies aren't any better than humans in that regard. Especially back then .

What I think has Luna worried most is the fact that there are almost 10 billion humans. We know only 4-5 known nations on Equus are larger than 1 milion, compare that to the 159 nations on Earth being over that. out of 233 or thereabouts.

I'm stopping here, this comment is getting waaay too long already.

Good job on the chapter, can't wait to see how Nate handles the Gryphons!

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Thank you for your encouraging words Jay

It's a good story, but it needs editing. For things like slang, and adding periods at the ends of dialouge.

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I'll look into the editing department when I'm done. Once I'm finished I'll have an easier time finding mistakes and errors.

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If one had been in the study section of the castle then her screams would have been deafening, but my son was gladly holding a parade outside, the screams of a maid mare no one would care about in a week being lost in the sea of happy cheers as the current king walked in front of his troops. I would defend my empire at any cost, it was my empire, and only my empire. My son would soon find that out the hard way.

Yep he's also teaching that lady the hard way.

Nergal: IT MEANS THEY'RE HAVIN SEX MOTHERFUCKER!

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XD

Casting the human species as warmongers, get that hippy-dippy bs out of here, but then again that does sounds like the opinion a sheltered 17 year old would have.

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That, also all he has known of humans is his cold parents and strangers that fear him.

What on earth is this writing? A few chapters ago he was grossed out by the thought of cross breeding with the poachers but now he’s excited? And then he’s so concerned with playing suck up to Osiris now too? That and the random rant about humanity being warmongers just has me confused. Such random inconsistent writing

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The main reason is the rewritten chapters clashing with the old ones. I never got time to continue the rewrite and as such it is inconsistent. I was not smart when I started the rewriting and as such the first old chapters are gone. I am sorry that this throws the whole story into such disarray.