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You know, a civilized folk might be more predisposed to answer questions when NOT UNCONSCIOUS . Especially if the other person, unlike you, tried DIPLOMACY first, and even afterwards only defended himself. Moreover, you're abducting the thing/person who saved two of your subjects!
Phew, now that my ranting over the ponies is over, great chapter! I can't wait to see how you portray Celestia. There is some "righteous" fury to be had over the maimed scout, but eh, maybe your first contact protocol kinda sucked. Can't wait to see them (Celly & Nate) interact, how do they intend to feed him, where do they take him, and how he reacts when he wakes up.
Keep it up, good work!
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Thank you I'm getting the chapter edited as I'm writing this comment, hopefully some of my poor grammar will be washed away with the power of edits. Anyway thank you for reading the chapter, it means a lot getting support on my stories ^-^
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Oh boye there come I to save the w0rld ;3
Primer fic antes del tiempo por ahora bien
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I don't understand
How was a wolf pup able to hunt for itself and take on a full grown pony?
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Should probably have mentioned what he hunted, also he surprised Osiris. But I'll add both points to the rewrite list