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Hmm our heroe needs to put in more time to master the hammer to get stronger to better protect luna
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True that. But as I don't want him to be OP he won't have the skill to protect her for some time. He just beat his instructor, who still went
relatively easy on him, so him beating Sombra or any other skilled combatant at this stage would make him feel a bit OP. My boi needs more training, as you said XD
I just realized I didn't give Silver Page her scene. Welp time to edit.
DAMN IT MAN!! You just HAD to Cliffhanger it here didn't you?!
Can't wait for more, so hurry up with the next chapter before I go barrow Pinkies Party Cannon!
Please make Nate say something like this to Celestia
"I hope you're satisfied. You gave Fury or Sombra as he now calls himself the equivalent of a slap on the wrist instead of the discharge and likely prison sentence and this is the result. Fury betrayed you, usurped his son's throne, enslaved the empire, attempted to kill me and Blaze AGAIN for no justifiable reason, tried to kill your sister, and now the empire is gone. Was it worth it? Is your fear of me still even a little justified? Even after I nearly died for her sake? Personally I find it ironic that you still think I'm a threat and keep these chains on me because of it, yet your ponies have proven time and again to be more of a threat to eachother, to you, and to me than I have to them, not just in regards to power, but aggression as well. Any respect I may have had towards you is now gone. The only thing keeping me on your side isn't these chains, but your sister who I've come to call friend. If that corruption alters her mind I won't hesitate to side with her, if that corruption kills her then you will remove these chains before I try to kill you as retribution. I refuse to die a slave and I refuse to die a traitor, especially when you denied me my justice and betrayed me first."
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Don't worry it is in the works XD
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I have something similar in mind
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Goooooood, let the hate flow through you.
As shadow rises on the frozen north
corruption of an evil king seeps forth.
Set on a path the sun has scorched to ash,
a poor decision hasted, made in rush,
And now the moon is close to being crushed.
Companions of the moon now lead the charge
into the darkness, unknown world at large.
To cure the moon who is starting to vane,
whom darkness caused excruciating pain,
they hope their journey isn't made in vain.
An evil king, tough banished, but not beat,
has dragged with him his country, and his seat.
One day his threat and power will be back,
but now another foe is to attack
Equestria is weakened, break it's back!
I don't know if the idol is this poetic, but if it were and knew I feel it would whisper something like the above.
Experimented a bit with the structure, switched to iambic pentameter...
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Dammit, you made me write another one!
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Thank you Jay I always love your poems.
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Translation: Celestia fucked up, prophecies are as cryptic as they are straight forward, there is going to be a war with the Griffons, the idol's destruction or theft will end the war if the griffon king's death does not, and hopefully everyone gets it through their thick skulls
EVERYTHING HAS A PRICE! ESPECIALLY POWER!
From something as easily traded such as free time to sanity, freedom, or even loss (looking at you Sombra and Griffon king)
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I agree. I would only add - everything and everyONE has a price. And in a corner, that price is always dirt cheap.