No one is brought into this world equal, and it's made even harder for Dylan as he's thrust into a world not his own. But he will become the pillar this place needs, because that's what legends are known for, and he will be Equestria's newest legend!
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I'm wondering, is this a harem story? And will there be clop?
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For your first question, no, it won't be a harem story, because Dylan is only 17 right now and he still has to get used to being around a bunch of ponies, the second question... Eventually
8576659
ok. Well, good luck!!
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Thank you, also thank you for reading my story, it truly means a lot to me :)
8576668
Hey man. I know the feeling. I myself have only 3 stories out. Maybe you could read them, and give me feedback.
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Sure thing
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Ok. The OC story is being edited, so bear with me on that story.
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I'll wait till you finish editing your OC but the other stories have really great starts, I really enjoyed reading them, also if you have someone who can help me edit my story I'd be extremely grateful, as this is my very first story. Anyways I really enjoyed your ghost rider fic as well as Spike's Secret Admirer, they have really awesome starts can't wait for more :)
Nice. I can't wait to see what changes with the story. Also here is a Pinkie~
The cover art looks like something out of DBZ...
Is that the powers he will have? If so, this should be marked as a Crossover even if you're not using a character from the show, though it's more of using its concept.
Should really separate the dialogue. Besides that and other rough edges it seems like a good story so far.
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Thank you very much for the feedback, and thanks for the advice on the way I'm writing, this is my first story so I'm gonna need some pointers every now and then, also I'm trying to find an editor to help me with the mistakes that I DO make. If you have any advice on an editor please let me know. And again thank you for the feedback and I hope that you enjoy the future chapters to come :)
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I was actually thinking about doing that, but if I actually decide to make this a crossover it won't include any character from dbz or any other anime. Also thank you for reading my story and leaving some feedback :)
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I haven't read it just yet as it is in my read it later list. The comment was mainly due to the cover art. And the Crossover tag doesn't always mean that there will be characters from somewhere you're doing the Crossover from. It is also used for using the show's concept or ideas for your own characters, like Wolf Blood did with his story, A Wolf Among Ponies.
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Yeah I was thinking of adding another character that has some characteristics on a dragonball super character, but will have a significantly smaller role from the main character.
Well this is new Rainbow Dash actually has a sizable bust in this one must make high speed flying more difficult though
You definitely have a good start off here, cant wait to see there reactions to the car
What is it with you and bra size
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Ok here's the catch, I don't know...
So I'll just say, you'll have to think up your own answer...
I'm sorry