No one is brought into this world equal, and it's made even harder for Dylan as he's thrust into a world not his own. But he will become the pillar this place needs, because that's what legends are known for, and he will be Equestria's newest legend!
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ok we got some plot, some more plot and some great "Plot"... all and all great chapter
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Thank you for the feedback, and am I really doing a good job? I honestly feel like I could be doing better, but if you think I'm doing fine then I'm extremely grateful for your support
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you're doing a great job. i could list all the ways but i like my comments short(less misunderstanding's that way...also i'm lazy and that list is longer then 15 points).
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH OLD PEOPLE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE KILL ME!!
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I know, not the most ideal, but at least they're not in their 60s doing it
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*grabs a 44 magnum and shoots myself* X_X
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Also if you remember in the earlier chapters, I explained how the 'ponies' look younger than they actually are, in this case Smith would look like she was in her early 30s, and I should have mentioned this in the earlier chapter but Kenneth has aged pretty well.
Huh never seen that much young granny smith clopfics here.
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Huh, I honestly hadn't thought about that, but that seems pretty cool that I wrote something uncommon 😁 by the way what did you think about the story, are there parts that could have been better do you think?
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I liked it, i do gotta ask is granny smith Aj, Mac, and Bloom's mother in this story? Also does this make grampa kenny apple bloom's dad? I do feel the chapters seem a bit rushed. Overall i feel like the story is progressing smoothly.
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What you've just said, filled me with relief, I honestly felt that I was going to fast with the progression of the story, but it's good to hear that I'm actually doing good on it, also I'm not entirely too sure about the Apple family's mother, as 8n the show I don't remember seeing too much of her, but I'll definitely put some thought into it, in the mean time can you take a guess as to what Kenneth's power will be?
Keep up the good work