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Could you please delete this comment?

UNICORN FARTS!!!

I thought you said comments would be deleted? Look at all of them, only a few have been deleted! Lol. Work on your spelling too, it could use a bit of work...

I commented! DELETE ME BITCH!!!!!!

You seem like you are fun at parties

Shouldn't blue be a mare?

This is just getting better and better I can't wait to see what happens next.

Poor spelling all-round, making it extremely difficult to read and even harder to take seriously.

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If blue was a mare then we would have a dusk/blue relationship going on that would take attention away from the prince's relationship with Eve, plus (I'm a guy) there would be a lot of girl talk and less story and I want more story. he he
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If you have a problem with misspellings then how about you point them out instead of acting like a story is automatically trash if there is some slight problems in it, I've seen stories with worse spelling than this easily

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I just thought it was odd that he wasn't a mare. Also blue is a dick. Dusk wouldn't like her.

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Yeah but its nice to see a good blue here, though if I saw a blue that was a mare and was nice, I'd have fun

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Okay. Have fun with that.

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All i'm saying is, it was so rampant throughout the story, and you can find them by simply reading through might I add, that it was difficult to read. No disrespect to the writer was meant at all just a simple criticism. And i want to spend my VERY precious free time copy and pasting spelling errors i would have done so.

" There is no need to thank me, after all, you helped me more than anypony ever could," He said stepping back smiling. "But I do have one question what will Eve be the Princess of after all you are the Princesses of the sun and moon, Cadance is the Princess of love, And Dusk Shine is the Prince of Magic and Friendship," He said making Solaris and Artemis look at each other.

It's actually "Princes" since are both Artemis and Solaris are a Prince. "Princesses" is the plural of "Princess"

Also....
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Just replace nanomachines with magic... i couldn't find an mlp version of this meme.....

rofl talk about a nimfo and i got no problem with it i'm just surprised it took so long to read this

"Are you sure you're alright my dear Eve the dining room is still some distance you could ride me if you like?" Artemis said looking at me with a smile.

Hearing that I couldn't pass it up I had to say it. Stopping I turned to look directly at him and with a sultry grin I smiled. " I have only been pregnant for a few hours and besides if I'm going to ride you-you're going to be on your back and I'm going to be naked when that happens,"

OOOOO ! Riding him reverse cowgirl style ! oooo ! I LIKE thaaaat ! ( All of a sudden I feel like a horny mare ) )

Artemis turned beet red as some of the guards chuckled softly hearing what I said. Seeing how embarrassed he was, I leaned in and kissed him on the lips slipping my tongue in his mouth to show I was sorry. We were kissing until our lungs needed air and so we parted I looked into his eyes and saw love and forgiveness.

( I've had a horse's tongue french kiss me once .)( True ) 💔 ( I fell in love with him . remembering him I get so emotional ! )