A swedish guy who was tricked by the merchant from Resident Evil 4 game to buy a sword and five spell books was send to an anthro Equestria on an adventure he never asked for.
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I SHIP IT TO THE MOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN
I ship it like FED EX
Well this was...fast if only relationships were actually like this.
Aaaaand the ship cometh.
at
exciting
??? do you meen "walked us through the fancy spread on display as we walked in." ?
that sentence is a bit awkward did you mean to add "she's been angry with me" in the beginning
try
up
up
kept
snapped
was lie down
tryed
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Thanks for all the corrections, it's been done.
However, by "Tryed" you mean 'Tried', right?
Again with the Canterlot Voice!
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Something wrong with it?
I completely skipped over the clop pprtion
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Why?
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Tried
Flutters the cougar.
I have just been listening to this song while reading and for some reason it makes it funnier.
Your grammar isn't the greatest, but it really isn't bad, quite passable actually, only occasional mistakes really.
Story is actually pretty good, like it.
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If you see any errors in my grammar, feel free to point them out and I will correct them.
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I SHIP IT TO THE INFINITY
I think that I have seen parts of this dialogue in another place here on fimfiction.
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Is that a bad thing?
Just to be clear, why did you time skipped, how the hell did Alex became nude and was on a bed hmm?!! Seriously GOD!! Now please forgive me but you should fix this, all of it, I felt nauseous just powering through this swamp you've made
Isn't this from The Scent Lust of mares???
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This story has many inspirations, including The Scent Lust of mares.
Jesus Christ. This guy makes all the other Gary Stu's look like average Joe.
You dirty fucking animal you had to ruin the damn story it was actually good
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?????
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The problem is that the sex interupts the story.
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How can sex interupt stories, there is sex in many stories which are more successful than even my own.
Care to explain that, please?