A swedish guy who was tricked by the merchant from Resident Evil 4 game to buy a sword and five spell books was send to an anthro Equestria on an adventure he never asked for.
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I decided to give the story another chance (for my own taste) and read this chapter to check if Alex would continue his slaughter.
*read through some paragraphs* ...
I saw what you did there.
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( I saw what you did there. )
https://youtu.be/26VAi9xhZKI?t=4s
why did you have to ruin this story with this bull shit chapter
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?????
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because when this story started you made it look like alexander was going to be that rare type of hero that was willing to do bad things in order to do the right thing even if they did not like and you also had a grate opportunity to have a hero that needs a dark power to do the right then but has to rely on that power to do and at the same time lose more and more of him self to that dark power and the stronger alexander get so to dose his dark powers and now with this bad chapter you have turned him into a Gary stu have him just throw away all of that in one moment and you should not of had queen chrysalis make a speech about love and kindness about ponies seeing as you have had the changeling been treated horribly by ponies she should not be saying that it should have been someone else
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+ I can't make everyone happy.
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i am not mad that you changed him I am mad that you did it in one chapter at the very end of said chapter his change of heart should have taken a bit longer and had him struggle with his morality more but as it is this was about as smooth and natural as sand paper
also for my own bit of morality quote 2.bp.blogspot.com/-qIA9H8ONf0w/UP8BS5-D5RI/AAAAAAAALfc/FDLxj8wt7TU/s400/He+who+sacrifices+freedom+for+security+shall+deserve+neither+Screenshot.png
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Some change of hearts can take years while others can only take a short moment.
It all depends on who the character really is.
8332395 still I feel that it should at least been the whole rather then just the last third and I feel alexander should have done a bit more to defend his actions and there should have been some of his mates that supported his choose rather then just all of them ganging up on him like that
also he should have said something like this s2.quickmeme.com/img/d8/d8125ff7615e632b2c027a1fd4631edf8f45ddb7f9a9854cd6cff24a534c5dbb.jpg
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Because security without freedom is neither security or freedom. It's either isolation or oppression.
Also all of Alexander's mates' parents have taught them that to oppose evil, you must walk a different path.
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well I say that he should have said that when he was told that ponies will just roll over and take the tyranny if they can have security or called ponies out on being cowards
and I feel that any one that dose fallow the crowd out of fear needs a good a beating and to quote Spartacus and emiliano zapataimg.quotery.com/pictures/2013/12/i-rather-die-on-my-feet.jpg
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Not everyone (or everypony in this case) has that courage when all their lives they are told to obey the law or be punished. + Whenever there has been some who opposed the tyrant, fought for freedom in vain (spartacus did and so did every hero of latin america).
Ponies are not predators, so they don't even have the courage of a house cat. You cannot punish someone for his/her nature. It’s like execute a female mantis for eating her mate for the need, or flogging a bear for hibernating.
Living in a society of sexism for more then a thousand years effects everyone's way of thinking, so it's not their fault for not being given a chance to do the right thing.
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well I don't think you can argue nature when dealing with sapient beings as they have the choice to change
also something that might help this chapter is fic the parents of his mates where split on if he was right or not like the predators are with his aggressive ideals and the pray's are not
also it is just in this chapter it seems like he was acting to much like a little bitch as in he is told he had done a bad thing and really did not even really try to defend his choice
also Spartacus did not really die in vain he died a free man rather then a slave and that can be called a victory
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He really tried to defend his action. But even he knows that sometimes the best respons to wisdom is silence.
Also all his life before Equestria he was taught to take in arguments and give them a thought before tossing them aside like trash.
Also sometimes sapient beings dosen't always have a choice. You sometime gonna do what you think is right, even if it is a bad thing.
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ok fair points but I still feel that sulfur or how ever you spell it should have been a late game antagonist rather then what feels like only the middle
also I will keep reading cause I am pot committed at this point
also I don't think this should count as a displaced fic
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First of it s Surtur. And at first I was going to place him at the final chapter but changed my mind after a few times of trying to make the whole story work.
And this is a displaced fic because of the comic con merchant.
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ah that now it makes since
and why I don't think it is because he is the same body he had as before his displacement where the rule of thumb is that even if they are not cospalying the would be turned into who ever was connected to the item like he should have been turned into Surtur or young thor unless the skyrim magic books cancelled that aspect of the displacement and just looking for some clear idea of why he did not turn
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Because it's those five spell books from skyrim that turned him into the customized character in the game. That's how he can absorb all the knowledges from other Spell books.
So Alexander didn't need a cosplay costume, he and the items are the cosplay.
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ah ok that makes since now
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You mean "make sense" not since?
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yes sorry spelling is really hard for me
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No worries😉
You are better at english than my mom is (snickering)
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But to be fair. Aboute your comment of spartacus, ok I'll take your words for it.
Cause a real man rather die with his life then to live without it.
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very true
also one thing I think undoing the nightmares was a bad tactical move
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Why? I want my character to turn Equestria into a nation of freedom, not a mad house.
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yes and it is a morally good thing stopping them but from a tactical point of view those nightmares ware keeping both the sisters occupied and they could not focus on him and his movements and now that they are gone they can focus on him more and luna can attack his dreams now
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Fine, point made. But the good news is that they have something more important than one person. They are in a middle of war. And they don't even know that the alpha is the very human who defied them.
Also Alexander undo those nightmares, not by tactical incompetence but for the sake of honor.
HONOR my friend.
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oh I know why he did it I am just pointing from a purely tactical point and those nightmares could have kept the sisters distracted from his army's movement and also now that luna is free of the nightmares she can not only attack alexander but his mates and there families and we both know that bitch would do it so unless moon can keep luna out of the dreams he done goofed
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And sadly... That is the risk Alexander must take:(
But for your information, Luna dosen't know if Alexander have mates or not, so that gives him an edge.
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ah
I have to also wonder why no one dose displaced fics for wow or diablo 3
also did you watch the video I sent for wow
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The video you send. Yes I did, thank you very much.
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so how many Viking references are there other then Odin
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Loki, Tyr, even Hel.
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ah cool any way I have to ask are you a gamer at all cause some questions I want to ask would need a gamer to understand them
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Yes and No
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ok rephrase then are at lest familiar with fantasy RPG settings
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?????
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I'll take you never played an RPG have you
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Never heard of it.
(just for fun)
Aaaand that's the same spineless direction it's going in.