A swedish guy who was tricked by the merchant from Resident Evil 4 game to buy a sword and five spell books was send to an anthro Equestria on an adventure he never asked for.
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So? Just make your sperm weak again and tell them what you told Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon, that you are infertile
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I would if I didn't told Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon about my ability to make my sperm weak. For they could tell Celestia about it and demands that I should make them strong again. 😓
So running without telling night or crysalis, that is not very honorable. Even IF they share the same way of thinking.
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Sounds kinky, but hey, other culture and all that.
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While he was running he was (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0u5wG5hXxBs).
So when does the empire building come into play for a empire of equal rights made by him? Also you mentioned the gender ratio for the equestrian races, not the other races such as griffons, Minotaur, etc. Are they all the same and if not emprie building with more allies? Well at the minimum at least he has Chrysalis's hive as an ally
shit went bad real fast
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I think he was more concerned with life at the moment. while we are aware that he is pretty powerful, we are unaware of Celestia's power compared to his. this means he could be many levels below Celestia in terms of magical capability and strength, with the only exception being his summons and traps.
on other terms, this story has progressed well, both in story and writing. plus the writing has improved exceptionally compared to the start. if I could suggest one thing though: perhaps you could leave the Swedish in the dialogue and thoughts, I'm sure this would save you a lot of grief of constantly translating between languages. it is mostly not needed when there is narration is occurring. this suggestion doesn't need to taken seriously, just sharing my thoughts. keep it up!
That was kinda harsh, he didn't permanently harm the ponies... I hope he eventually removes that ring from Loctus.
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Why do you think it was harsh? It seems pretty fair to most people.
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Fairness is all in the eyes of the beholder
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Pretty much.
When is he going to get his viking armor or does he already have it?
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Keep reading and you will find his armor.