...I really hope this doesn't end up as 'suddenly human is destined to save Equestria from some war' or 'human teachs ponies about guns'

Wow. I've never read a HtP fic that starts from a pony's POV

It's like you didn't even bother to proofread your own story.

This looks interesting n' all, but I have a few suggestions & criticisms
1. Proof read the chapter, I saw a decent amount of spelling errors etc
2. Perhaps add a more convincing cover, it doesn't really make sense for Reyes to not question the situation & just accept it completely
3. What exactly is with the description of all the mares blushing? I didn't see cause for the actions (unless I skipped something by accident, in which case ignore this)
I'm not trying to be critical of your work, but just suggestions (or criticisms), like I said

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It's alright. Thanks for telling me this! I'll be sure to get work on fixing everything.

8288904 fix dis plz I immediately take notice of my body, my fur being pitch back, my mane the being the same color also. Damn....I still look badass as ever! BLACK "You ain't getting away with breaking and entering that castle!" THE

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In other words elaborate and provide us with more detail?

The potential for this story has so much YES on it, and I can't wait to see how it turns out!
Also, how often do you plan on updating this story?

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Already done.

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I'll be sure to do that, and thank you for the words for my story. I really don't know how often I'll be updating it.

Would have been better if he was human

By this chapter alone I already see hella errors

What the fuck??? This story makes no sense lmao