Rainbow Dash finds herself in quite a pickle when her heat arrives earlier than expected... Unfortunately, a mix-up with her estrus medication kicks things into overdrive: Anon and Rainbow Dash are in for a wild ride!
Welp, for once Angel tried to be helpful... but when you have tunnel vision, you don't really think clearly. We're in for a wild ride! ... or, well, Rainbow is
But... this doesn't seem to have anything at all to do with my art... The picture I did with Rainbow Dash was about Anon walking in on her in a stable, tied up and ready to breed while she was in heat. This just seems more about random lewd adventures of Rainbow Dash.
8287356 My goodness! I'm graced by a comment from on of my favorite artists/writers!!!
As I tried to note, I keep getting caught up in getting Dashie to the scene where she is tied up and waiting for Anon. I plan for that to occur next chapter, I promise!
I know the work is extremely lewd, and not really your usual style of well planned and story driven romance, for which I apologise. I am definitely the drunken one night stand compared to your beautiful relationships!
8287377 Nah, its not that. I like me some pure clop stories, but when I saw that this was inspired by my art, I was expecting to see some Anon x Rainbow baby making. But it hasn't been that at all. Why do you tease me like this?!
to be honest, all ive gleaned from this fic so far, is that Rainbow is a bit of a slut. Not the kind of thing you should open an AnonXdash fic with, as guess who most of the readers of anondash fics are?
interesting story, but I agree with pusspuss, it could have been written very differently.
8287602 8287431 I'll admit I'm inclined to agree a little.
Plus Rainbow really doesn't seem like she'd be the kind to sleep around being Loyalty and all. If anything I would think she'd be the most likely to pick a single partner and stick with them in lieu of all others.
Of course I'm still curious to see where this story goes. It's been a while since I've run across a Rainbow + Anon/Human fic that's caught my attention, and combining inspired by Pusspuss with Rainbow Dash is certainly a good way to do it.
Hey guys, thanks for the feedback! Totally get where you're coming from. Is my raunch factor high? Yes!
Do I paint Dash as a slut? Ehhh debatable.
I definitely like to make reproductive biology in ponies so strong to the point that it nearly overcomes the more sapient mindstate. It's a kink of mine for sure.
That being said, even with this ramped up sexuality I'd like to note that my Dashie has only had an embarrassing wet dream (which she regrets), and has uncontrollably reacted to some stallions (which she also regrets). I think of those as more like random boners than any manifestation of true desire.
So, yeah I took a way different tack than Pusspuss - he's the master of writing a romance that makes your heart melt... but don't throw my Dashie under the bus yet! Mares in heat can get pretty lovey dovey when they are with their crushes in my fics too!
8288164 well yeah, aside from the fact that in the first chapter you said that she locked herself in a room with spitfire, soarin and thunderlane for four days straight. Doesnt sound like she regretted that very much.
8289235 Funny you mention that, I was actually just thinking about how that creates a bit of an incongruity as I was writing the next chapter. It was a bit of a spur of the moment addition, and I regret it a little.
I didn't want to have Dash be a total 'blushing virgin' type either though.
8289275 whatever floats your boat man, im just saying it did tend to stick out. Like, if this story was a train, that sentence was like a few meters of track missing, that the whole thing just sorta stumbled through.
so far it looks not bad, but I have to read it from the beginning again, I just looke here and there, readed a big part to get a feel for the story and I like it so far. I just hope that the Anon isn't some sort of player, or the horny guy with a personality like an asshole, I want something different or a nice Anon again.
Herbal laughed again "Sorry, sorry! Couldn't help myself. He's got such a love-struck face on right now... poor colt. If you really can't wait until tomorrow, Zecora or Fluttershy should have some available for sale."
either that or they just want the one thing.
I'm just glad that they are acting more like intelligent cartoon characters then horses forced to breed here, with the moon tea and the way Dash seem not just wanting to fuck.
The thing that is going to happen next is probably because of Angle bunny and the drugs he seems to use if I got that right by the quick look I took.
And this is why you don't piss of angel bunny when he is trying to help you, and why you always read the label before you do anything. Shit is about to go down. I can't wait to see what happens next.
8287706 I agree on the "Loyalty = Monogamy" thing. 8289275 If you wish to avoid "blushing virgin" you could replace that bit.with something about desiring to be Awesome in all things, she got LOTS of details from her mother and other (non-book) sources. Or read up on it after "Read It and Weep" and/or "Testing Testing 1 2 3" .
Such an edit might even get me to change my download to an up.
The pause was interrupted as Herbal picked up the intercom mic and said, in as flat a tone as she could manage, "Cleanup, main aisle... cleanup, main aisle... mop and bucket required." Before she burst out laughing.
Not gonna lie, I would probably do that minus the burst of laughter.
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Welp, for once Angel tried to be helpful... but when you have tunnel vision, you don't really think clearly.
We're in for a wild ride!
... or, well, Rainbow is
Angel you magnificent bastard
But... this doesn't seem to have anything at all to do with my art... The picture I did with Rainbow Dash was about Anon walking in on her in a stable, tied up and ready to breed while she was in heat. This just seems more about random lewd adventures of Rainbow Dash.
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My goodness! I'm graced by a comment from on of my favorite artists/writers!!!
As I tried to note, I keep getting caught up in getting Dashie to the scene where she is tied up and waiting for Anon. I plan for that to occur next chapter, I promise!
I know the work is extremely lewd, and not really your usual style of well planned and story driven romance, for which I apologise. I am definitely the drunken one night stand compared to your beautiful relationships!
8287377
Nah, its not that. I like me some pure clop stories, but when I saw that this was inspired by my art, I was expecting to see some Anon x Rainbow baby making. But it hasn't been that at all. Why do you tease me like this?!
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I've heard that teasing is half the fun.
Seriously though, Anon will get his romp next chapter, promise.
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yeah but... it should have been about Rainbow and Anon... so you should have set Anon up at the start.
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to be honest, all ive gleaned from this fic so far, is that Rainbow is a bit of a slut. Not the kind of thing you should open an AnonXdash fic with, as guess who most of the readers of anondash fics are?
interesting story, but I agree with pusspuss, it could have been written very differently.
Your concepts of breeding are weird...
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I'll admit I'm inclined to agree a little.
Plus Rainbow really doesn't seem like she'd be the kind to sleep around being Loyalty and all. If anything I would think she'd be the most likely to pick a single partner and stick with them in lieu of all others.
Of course I'm still curious to see where this story goes. It's been a while since I've run across a Rainbow + Anon/Human fic that's caught my attention, and combining inspired by Pusspuss with Rainbow Dash is certainly a good way to do it.
todaies forcast calls for extreme heat with high humility
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Hey guys, thanks for the feedback! Totally get where you're coming from. Is my raunch factor high? Yes!
Do I paint Dash as a slut? Ehhh debatable.
I definitely like to make reproductive biology in ponies so strong to the point that it nearly overcomes the more sapient mindstate. It's a kink of mine for sure.
That being said, even with this ramped up sexuality I'd like to note that my Dashie has only had an embarrassing wet dream (which she regrets), and has uncontrollably reacted to some stallions (which she also regrets). I think of those as more like random boners than any manifestation of true desire.
So, yeah I took a way different tack than Pusspuss - he's the master of writing a romance that makes your heart melt... but don't throw my Dashie under the bus yet! Mares in heat can get pretty lovey dovey when they are with their crushes in my fics too!
Angel Strikes Again!!!!!
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YOU'D RECKON SIR ADMIRAL MAJOR ADMIRAL VANGUARD OFFICER SECOND DEGREE PYTHAGORAS KLED HAS SEEN IT ALL.
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well yeah, aside from the fact that in the first chapter you said that she locked herself in a room with spitfire, soarin and thunderlane for four days straight. Doesnt sound like she regretted that very much.
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Funny you mention that, I was actually just thinking about how that creates a bit of an incongruity as I was writing the next chapter. It was a bit of a spur of the moment addition, and I regret it a little.
I didn't want to have Dash be a total 'blushing virgin' type either though.
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whatever floats your boat man, im just saying it did tend to stick out. Like, if this story was a train, that sentence was like a few meters of track missing, that the whole thing just sorta stumbled through.
I hope you are very detailed with the bondage scenes! <3
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Just for you, I went back and added a little more detail!
Hoping to get the new chapter up soon!
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Haha, that's awesome. I appreciate it
which I will try to get up soon (maybe today even!)
lies, beautiful lies
so far it looks not bad, but I have to read it from the beginning again, I just looke here and there, readed a big part to get a feel for the story and I like it so far. I just hope that the Anon isn't some sort of player, or the horny guy with a personality like an asshole, I want something different or a nice Anon again.
either that or they just want the one thing.
I'm just glad that they are acting more like intelligent cartoon characters then horses forced to breed here, with the moon tea and the way Dash seem not just wanting to fuck.
The thing that is going to happen next is probably because of Angle bunny and the drugs he seems to use if I got that right by the quick look I took.
And this is why you don't piss of angel bunny when he is trying to help you, and why you always read the label before you do anything. Shit is about to go down. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Should have hit up Zecora instead there, RD. Patience never was your strong suit...
Oh, that wascawwy wabbit!
The jungle of a door chime huh? Dont you mean JINGME
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A JINGME? You mean, Jingle don’t you?
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Fixed thanks!
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I agree on the "Loyalty = Monogamy" thing.
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If you wish to avoid "blushing virgin" you could replace that bit.with something about desiring to be Awesome in all things, she got LOTS of details from her mother and other (non-book) sources. Or read up on it after "Read It and Weep" and/or "Testing Testing 1 2 3" .
Such an edit might even get me to change my download to an up.
I'm sure that I don't have to guess what Pepper will be doing in his 'coffee' break...
Funny thing is I could see 'Angel' doing that to somepony that annoying little shite.
Not gonna lie, I would probably do that minus the burst of laughter.