8248200 I'm thinking of doing something involving pet-play for the Rarity Chapter. I'm still thinking on how Rainbow Dash's exhibition would be more risky, so I'm probably going to use your idea and have them do it in a more public place, rather than the back of a restaurant or a movie theater with few people in it
8248209 Good choice. Though how would be the pet in the Rarity chapter? Also I curious, as soon as the Mane 6 are done do you intend to use other characters like Celestia and Luna or Zecora?
8248220 Spike would be the pet, and yes, I'm going to use other characters once I finish with the Mane Six, although Gilda might show up in the Rainbow Dash chapter
8248297 Most definitely. :) Though, in my mind for the idea, I'm not sure if Gilda would pleasure herself while watching Spike and Rainbow or would later join them.
Just to get you people to stop talking about me ripping off the comic, I will say that I have read it. I actually have, but not in a long time. So there, I know the comic exists and I was trying to think of a way to change it without looking back at the comic. When I found out that I had used too much from the comic, I went back to reeducate myself for the new chapters. Twilight's chapter was different, as will all of the Mane Six's chapters. They will not be exact duplicates of the comic like the first chapter was. I apologize for saying I didn't read it, but my memory is not that good. Multiple times I go to somebody to ask a question, only to forget what I was going to ask.
8249820 I admit, I was inspired by it, but I didn't try to copy it word for word, it was only when I reread the comic that I realized I basically did. If you have a way to make the first chapter more original and less of a ripoff of the comic, I'm open to suggestions.
8249845 Thank Celestia, most people are claiming that I'm plagiarizing it because of how similar the first chapter was to the comic. I'm sorry I got defensive
I'd like to suggest the writing up of the events of the original two dragons and the characters stories from the village that Celestia had 'wiped from the records' It was only a blurb in the comics but it has a great deal of potential and many unnamed undeveloped paths.
There is also the story lines of what happened when they were moved to the island plus a potential story of either an exploration or an invasion if they try to get off the island. The invasion was inspired by Celestia's habit of dumping some criminals either in another dimension or just 'shooing' them away. Does anyone really believe they are just going to say "Well they don't want us there so we'll just stay away" and actually stay away?
you know something that's really weird, I have seen both the comic and a fanfic on fanfiction.com(or another site but i'm 90% sure it was fanfiction.com) but I was never sure which came first cause I found the fanfiction after the comic, but I assumed the fanfic came first due to it having already been complete and having depicted every thing that has currently happened in the comics even now, you wouldn't happen to know which came first would you?
8251173 I don't know when either came out, Palcomix only keeps dates on the comics that are in progress, but I believe that the comic came first, since when I read the fan fiction, it left out a lot of details on what happened at the town that Celestia had to erase from history. If the fan fiction did come out first, he probably commissioned it with Palcomix
The fanfic come first and how I know that is for I follow that series. About the comic on palcomix is not a commission for the writer on fanfic, but by a person on inkbunny.
8251293 The only problem with pegging is he'll have one of those tail butt plugs in him. I was thinking of having Rarity make him cum into a food bowl and have him drink it
I think it would be interesting to have Spike meet his biological parents...and realize that his parents were banished by his adoptive mother...how would he handle it? Definitely conflict because of it... but then again, Spyro and Cynder probably didn't realize that before Celestia banished them, Cynder laid an egg that turned into Spike...
8265670 Actually that works rather spectacularly. It's original and it does tie into the small iota of a story element that is plausible to his creation. Heck he is even with-in the same portion of the color spectrum of Spyro and Cynder which is an interesting coincidence. His emotional conflict within himself over his situation between both pairs of parents would add depth to his character. However I think he isn't going to go down that path with Spyro and Cynder. He has stated it in his last communicae.
However... what about a feral sister he finds that is going through the same heat but has secluded herself in the Everfree forest??
8265934 That's an interesting plot point that could work with what the other guy you we're responding to said as said sister could actually have still been with Cinder and Spyro when they were banished and was raised by them allowing a bit more lore than the comics and original fanfic also it would be able to lengthen the story after the main six (and possibly Celestia and Luna) all get some of Spike as a bonus chapter or something that extends Spike's heat or stays with his current heat to end the story with him either going with his parents or staying with the girls. (or both as 2 chapters that tell what each choice would have looked like and a possible 3rd chapter that give either a true ending or something we're his parents *and possible sister* are welcomed back and are pardoned for their original crime/wrong doing)
Excellent role-play between the two
Nice change in the role-play. How goes the plans for the next chapters?
8248200
I'm thinking of doing something involving pet-play for the Rarity Chapter. I'm still thinking on how Rainbow Dash's exhibition would be more risky, so I'm probably going to use your idea and have them do it in a more public place, rather than the back of a restaurant or a movie theater with few people in it
8248209
Good choice. Though how would be the pet in the Rarity chapter?
Also I curious, as soon as the Mane 6 are done do you intend to use other characters like Celestia and Luna or Zecora?
8248220
Spike would be the pet, and yes, I'm going to use other characters once I finish with the Mane Six, although Gilda might show up in the Rainbow Dash chapter
8248240
Cool, you taking my suggestion that Gilda might catch Spike and Rainbow doing it?
8248245
Yes, I thought it might be interesting
8248297
Most definitely. :)
Though, in my mind for the idea, I'm not sure if Gilda would pleasure herself while watching Spike and Rainbow or would later join them.
8248318
I'm thinking of making her pleasure herself and get caught by Rainbow Dash and Spike, caught somebody while they were catching you XD
8248329
An interesting twists. I like it. XD
8248329
So you used my idea, cool.
8246521
Should be referred to as 'rut', really.
Yeah!
I knew it!
8248987
Knew what?
Just to get you people to stop talking about me ripping off the comic, I will say that I have read it. I actually have, but not in a long time. So there, I know the comic exists and I was trying to think of a way to change it without looking back at the comic. When I found out that I had used too much from the comic, I went back to reeducate myself for the new chapters. Twilight's chapter was different, as will all of the Mane Six's chapters. They will not be exact duplicates of the comic like the first chapter was. I apologize for saying I didn't read it, but my memory is not that good. Multiple times I go to somebody to ask a question, only to forget what I was going to ask.
8249593
Ypu read the equestia untamed com8c version for this
8249820
I admit, I was inspired by it, but I didn't try to copy it word for word, it was only when I reread the comic that I realized I basically did. If you have a way to make the first chapter more original and less of a ripoff of the comic, I'm open to suggestions.
8249843
Never said you copied it
8249845
Thank Celestia, most people are claiming that I'm plagiarizing it because of how similar the first chapter was to the comic. I'm sorry I got defensive
I'd like to suggest the writing up of the events of the original two dragons and the characters stories from the village that Celestia had 'wiped from the records' It was only a blurb in the comics but it has a great deal of potential and many unnamed undeveloped paths.
There is also the story lines of what happened when they were moved to the island plus a potential story of either an exploration or an invasion if they try to get off the island. The invasion was inspired by Celestia's habit of dumping some criminals either in another dimension or just 'shooing' them away. Does anyone really believe they are just going to say "Well they don't want us there so we'll just stay away" and actually stay away?
8250572
I'm not really interested in bringing Spyro or Cynder into the story, thanks for the suggestion though
8250591
Fair enough. Was thinking that it might have been a separate story. Will still follow the current story path.
Can't Wait to read the rest
you know something that's really weird, I have seen both the comic and a fanfic on fanfiction.com(or another site but i'm 90% sure it was fanfiction.com) but I was never sure which came first cause I found the fanfiction after the comic, but I assumed the fanfic came first due to it having already been complete and having depicted every thing that has currently happened in the comics even now, you wouldn't happen to know which came first would you?
8251173
I don't know when either came out, Palcomix only keeps dates on the comics that are in progress, but I believe that the comic came first, since when I read the fan fiction, it left out a lot of details on what happened at the town that Celestia had to erase from history. If the fan fiction did come out first, he probably commissioned it with Palcomix
8251184
The fanfic come first and how I know that is for I follow that series.
About the comic on palcomix is not a commission for the writer on fanfic, but by a person on inkbunny.
8251259
Thanks for clearing that up
Also, does anyone have any ideas for the Rarity chapter? It involves pet-play with Spike playing the role as the pet.
8251259
thanks for explaining
8251275
how about pegging or something, anything would do just don't let it be normal
8251293
The only problem with pegging is he'll have one of those tail butt plugs in him. I was thinking of having Rarity make him cum into a food bowl and have him drink it
8251305
sounds good, also the artist PIA has proven that pegging can look pretty good(at least in her sparity art)
Momlestia and Aunt Luna are watching their surrogate son/nephew having intercourse with the Mane 6?
8251372
Yep, at first it was just to make sure it was working, but it grows into being perverts
8250625
I think it would be interesting to have Spike meet his biological parents...and realize that his parents were banished by his adoptive mother...how would he handle it? Definitely conflict because of it... but then again, Spyro and Cynder probably didn't realize that before Celestia banished them, Cynder laid an egg that turned into Spike...
8265670
Actually that works rather spectacularly. It's original and it does tie into the small iota of a story element that is plausible to his creation. Heck he is even with-in the same portion of the color spectrum of Spyro and Cynder which is an interesting coincidence. His emotional conflict within himself over his situation between both pairs of parents would add depth to his character. However I think he isn't going to go down that path with Spyro and Cynder. He has stated it in his last communicae.
However... what about a feral sister he finds that is going through the same heat but has secluded herself in the Everfree forest??
More please
8265934
That's an interesting plot point that could work with what the other guy you we're responding to said as said sister could actually have still been with Cinder and Spyro when they were banished and was raised by them allowing a bit more lore than the comics and original fanfic also it would be able to lengthen the story after the main six (and possibly Celestia and Luna) all get some of Spike as a bonus chapter or something that extends Spike's heat or stays with his current heat to end the story with him either going with his parents or staying with the girls. (or both as 2 chapters that tell what each choice would have looked like and a possible 3rd chapter that give either a true ending or something we're his parents *and possible sister* are welcomed back and are pardoned for their original crime/wrong doing)
It can be both of you on Sundays.