I'm not sure she should give them another hcance. Truth is they hadn't let go of the grudges and anger they have at her, the Amon Miss stories stated that easily. Why else they LEAPED/DIVED at accussing her of being the one behind it, And that was after Rainbow Rocks.
With how they treated her in the story and kept reminding her of her mistakes and sins... I think be easier if she went to Crystal Prep, there she find Human twilight who needs a friend as much as she does.
8081060 I'm not including the Anon-A-Miss arc in the series. I feel there's enough "depressed Sunset" stories that go down that road. There's enough spots in Rainbow Rocks to send her to the same point as the end of Anon-A-Miss if it's set-up properly.
Wow that was quite a heavy chapter. I personally wouldn't give them another chance. I hope she goes back to Equestrian since the students and teachers will still treat Sunset like an outcast. Which is quite unfair to do towards Sunset just because she bullied them in the past. It is also true that the Human 5 are just pretending to act like they do care both in this story and the movies. The only time they do care was at the 4th movie.
It is also true that the Human 5 are just pretending to act like they do care both in this story and the movies.
With the exception of this chapter, there was actual word-for-word dialogue from Rainbow Rocks in parts of them. That's why the story characters mirror the ones in the movie so well.
8081737 I was trying to go for dumbfounded/stunned for the other 5. The next chapter is going to take a while to get up because I have to rewrite it from scratch. But that's twice that you nailed the surprise on the head. (First being in "Voices")
8081060 To be fair to the EQG characters, there hasn't really been time for them to get over their grudges against Sunset Shimmer.
In EQG1, It's the Fall Formal. Sunset at this point has bullied and intimidated the whole school for years since her arrival. The kind of resentment and ill-will the kids have towards Sunset just doesn't go away because she was hit with an orbital friendship rainbow laser beam. Sunset Shimmer might be ready to change and say sorry, but she has to acknowledge and accept the emotional mess she left behind.
This has never happened.
In EQG2, which started almost as soon as the first ended and takes place over a few weeks, we see the pent up resentment from the school populace towards Sunset. This is entirely justified! They have a right to hate her! She made their life hell for years! But we only see it from Sunset's POV, where how dare they feel that way? I'm all better now, so let's move on and share cupcakes and be friends.
It doesn't work like that! The Humane 5 have every right to shut her out. SHE BULLIED THEM AND SPLIT THEM UP! They accept her into their circle of friends as and when THEY want, not when Sunset wants just because she's all reformed now. All those digs from AJ about power-crazed demons are spot on. Sunset can suck it up and take it.
EQG3 comes around no more than maybe a year after the second. Her redemption arc is more or less complete here. There's no more snide comments and they're all friendly friends.
8081848 While you are completly right about the rest of the studentbody having every right to resent Sunset for what she did, the Humane 5 were the ones who offered Sunset that chance at redemption and invited her into their circle of friends for that purpose. They shouldn't have done that, if they weren't ready to actually forgive her and move on with their lifes. To offer to teach Sunset on how to be a friend, only treat her nothing like a friend, is nothing short of hypocritical.
Not that they would know much about friendship. You said that Sunset split them appart, but in all due reality, they did that to themselves. As EQG demonstrated, literally all it took for them to see through Sunsets scheme, was to talk to each other like normal friends would. They failed miserably at the most basic foundation of any relationship: healthy communication. The Humane 5 split apart because they're terrible at being friends.
As for the timeframe of the story, EQG2 takes place several months after EQG. The first part of this story states as much.
To offer to teach Sunset on how to be a friend, only treat her nothing like a friend, is nothing short of hypocritical.
Not that they would know much about friendship.
I agree wholly with what you say here. I only said Sunset split them up because it shows her doing this in the comic I have. But yes, to your point, all they had to do was communicate effectively and any conflict would've been cleared up almost immediately.
To the author of this story, I want to say I love this story and I only 'over analysed' it because I like it so much. I love how you've woven the tale of Sunset's depression in and around the events of EQG 2 and used dialog from the movie to help tell your story. That's very well done.
I've read this for a while now and honestly I didn't expect something like this. I saw Rainbow Rocks and I saw what Sunset was going through but I never thought it would drive her to suicide. After reading this though I honestly hate the Main Fives human counterparts even more than I did when I read that piece of shit Holiday Special comic.
Plus there are valid points. Sunset knew just as much about Equestrian magic like Twilight. She was Celestia's former pupil for Christ sake! Hell she knew how to play guitar and even sing but as much as it kills me to say this I guess Aria was right about that.
Should Sunset forgive the Rainbooms? Hell no! If anything she should tell them to fuck off and go back to Equestria with Twilight and Spike. At least there she can learn friendship and be safe. Also you should have Twilight bitch out Principle Celestia and Vice Principle Luna since I felt those two were petty in bringing up her mistakes from the Fall Formal and I doubt that was mind control, that was all them. You should have Twilight tell them they are incompetent idiots for not doing their jobs.
I at least hope to see a happy ending to this and the Dazzlings get beat. Hope to see more soon.
8084615 The problem is that where this has to go is giving me fits. I'd like to wrap this up in one more chapter but I think it may take two. It all depends on the word count.
I lifted my head, looked at Twilight, looked over my shoulder at the girls and then back at Twilight. After looking at the girls one more time, I thought for a few minutes, then gave my response.
This is my response... F you, go to tardrus, and im going back through the portal after the battle
8505343 Thank you. A lot of this story was written when I personally was in a suicidal mindset. I would like to believe that not just writing this story but also fimfiction is what saved me from that dark spot.
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8505485 Good to know and hope you get better because the boat for Suicidal Thoughts is crowded and I would like some leg room cuz I have claustrophobia on this ride. 👍😓☺
Personally I would not forgive them the only reason I would consider forgiving them and staying is because of the knowledge of what will happen in the future like EG3 and EG4.
"I'm... I'm leaving, permanently," I cried. "No one cares. After a group lovefest by the statue this morning, those two-faced... bitches showed me that all that matters to them is winning a stupid band competition. Now if you don't mind, it's time for me to go."
I know this is sad, but I can't help but find this part hilariously similar to one of the scenes from the first HP movie.
I'm not sure she should give them another hcance.
Truth is they hadn't let go of the grudges and anger they have at her, the Amon Miss stories stated that easily.
Why else they LEAPED/DIVED at accussing her of being the one behind it, And that was after Rainbow Rocks.
With how they treated her in the story and kept reminding her of her mistakes and sins... I think be easier if she went to Crystal Prep, there she find Human twilight who needs a friend as much as she does.
8081060 I'm not including the Anon-A-Miss arc in the series. I feel there's enough "depressed Sunset" stories that go down that road. There's enough spots in Rainbow Rocks to send her to the same point as the end of Anon-A-Miss if it's set-up properly.
Wow that was quite a heavy chapter.
I personally wouldn't give them another chance.
I hope she goes back to Equestrian since the students and teachers will still treat Sunset like an outcast.
Which is quite unfair to do towards Sunset just because she bullied them in the past.
It is also true that the Human 5 are just pretending to act like they do care both in this story and the movies.
The only time they do care was at the 4th movie.
8081103 Thanks.
With the exception of this chapter, there was actual word-for-word dialogue from Rainbow Rocks in parts of them. That's why the story characters mirror the ones in the movie so well.
Honestly i hope she doesn't forgive them and goes back to equestria with twi
8081557 Only "time" will tell.
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All in all, a pretty good chapter with a lot of emotion and shit. Finally the girls got their stern talking but I gotta say that their reaction were kinda downplayed. Don´t know about you but I would react a little bit more if I was told that I almost drove someone to suicide but hey, guess that only solidifies that they don´t care on an emotional level and only shows what is necessary to keep up apperance.
8081737 I was trying to go for dumbfounded/stunned for the other 5. The next chapter is going to take a while to get up because I have to rewrite it from scratch. But that's twice that you nailed the surprise on the head. (First being in "Voices")
8081060 To be fair to the EQG characters, there hasn't really been time for them to get over their grudges against Sunset Shimmer.
In EQG1, It's the Fall Formal. Sunset at this point has bullied and intimidated the whole school for years since her arrival. The kind of resentment and ill-will the kids have towards Sunset just doesn't go away because she was hit with an orbital friendship rainbow laser beam. Sunset Shimmer might be ready to change and say sorry, but she has to acknowledge and accept the emotional mess she left behind.
This has never happened.
In EQG2, which started almost as soon as the first ended and takes place over a few weeks, we see the pent up resentment from the school populace towards Sunset. This is entirely justified! They have a right to hate her! She made their life hell for years! But we only see it from Sunset's POV, where how dare they feel that way? I'm all better now, so let's move on and share cupcakes and be friends.
It doesn't work like that! The Humane 5 have every right to shut her out. SHE BULLIED THEM AND SPLIT THEM UP! They accept her into their circle of friends as and when THEY want, not when Sunset wants just because she's all reformed now. All those digs from AJ about power-crazed demons are spot on. Sunset can suck it up and take it.
EQG3 comes around no more than maybe a year after the second. Her redemption arc is more or less complete here. There's no more snide comments and they're all friendly friends.
8081790 Ah, Fair enough I suppose. What can I say? I think way too much ahah..haha...haderpicdn.net/img/2016/5/26/1163208/large.jpg
8081848 While you are completly right about the rest of the studentbody having every right to resent Sunset for what she did, the Humane 5 were the ones who offered Sunset that chance at redemption and invited her into their circle of friends for that purpose.
They shouldn't have done that, if they weren't ready to actually forgive her and move on with their lifes.
To offer to teach Sunset on how to be a friend, only treat her nothing like a friend, is nothing short of hypocritical.
Not that they would know much about friendship.
You said that Sunset split them appart, but in all due reality, they did that to themselves.
As EQG demonstrated, literally all it took for them to see through Sunsets scheme, was to talk to each other like normal friends would.
They failed miserably at the most basic foundation of any relationship: healthy communication.
The Humane 5 split apart because they're terrible at being friends.
As for the timeframe of the story, EQG2 takes place several months after EQG. The first part of this story states as much.
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I agree wholly with what you say here. I only said Sunset split them up because it shows her doing this in the comic I have. But yes, to your point, all they had to do was communicate effectively and any conflict would've been cleared up almost immediately.
To the author of this story, I want to say I love this story and I only 'over analysed' it because I like it so much. I love how you've woven the tale of Sunset's depression in and around the events of EQG 2 and used dialog from the movie to help tell your story. That's very well done.
I've read this for a while now and honestly I didn't expect something like this. I saw Rainbow Rocks and I saw what Sunset was going through but I never thought it would drive her to suicide. After reading this though I honestly hate the Main Fives human counterparts even more than I did when I read that piece of shit Holiday Special comic.
Plus there are valid points. Sunset knew just as much about Equestrian magic like Twilight. She was Celestia's former pupil for Christ sake! Hell she knew how to play guitar and even sing but as much as it kills me to say this I guess Aria was right about that.
Should Sunset forgive the Rainbooms? Hell no! If anything she should tell them to fuck off and go back to Equestria with Twilight and Spike. At least there she can learn friendship and be safe. Also you should have Twilight bitch out Principle Celestia and Vice Principle Luna since I felt those two were petty in bringing up her mistakes from the Fall Formal and I doubt that was mind control, that was all them. You should have Twilight tell them they are incompetent idiots for not doing their jobs.
I at least hope to see a happy ending to this and the Dazzlings get beat. Hope to see more soon.
Good Luck Pabrony83.
The last chapter felt right. Thanks, man. Cliffhanger sucks though. So many cliffhangers for so few words.
Well, it does it's job. So impatient waiting it is)
8082736 I ran into a continuity issue and have to completely rewrite the next chapter from scratch, so it's gonna be a little bit.
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Take your time. Writing is a lot of work. Especially when you write about emotions. It's so freaking tricky and frustrating sometimes.
8084615 The problem is that where this has to go is giving me fits. I'd like to wrap this up in one more chapter but I think it may take two. It all depends on the word count.
this feels exactly like chicken soup for the teenage soul tough stuff which is a big deal to me good job
8209141 Thank you.
8355779 It was necessary in order for the story to make sense.
This is my response...
F you, go to tardrus, and im going back through the portal after the battle
8408047 I actually was going to go with that response before I decided to tie Books 4-6 to Books 1 and 2.
I have to say you did this really accurately and I loved how Twilight was actually angry. That's a true friend right there.
8505343 Thank you. A lot of this story was written when I personally was in a suicidal mindset. I would like to believe that not just writing this story but also fimfiction is what saved me from that dark spot.
8505485
Good to know and hope you get better because the boat for Suicidal Thoughts is crowded and I would like some leg room cuz I have claustrophobia on this ride. 👍😓☺
8505485
Sorry. 😓☺
Oof, that was rough.
Personally I would not forgive them the only reason I would consider forgiving them and staying is because of the knowledge of what will happen in the future like EG3 and EG4.
So yeah... Sunset and I share a common bond of being left out and wanting to kill ourselves.
I know this is sad, but I can't help but find this part hilariously similar to one of the scenes from the first HP movie.
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