She got caught can't blame her though they did lash out at her after saying they do care for her. Liars. Then Twilight does nothing so much for the Princess of Friendship. (Including Anon-A-Miss) I hope whoever found Sunset cutting herself can help her.
I wonder exactly why these girls qualified for the elements of harmony to begin with. They are lousy at friendship. And at learning lessons.
Sure, you're our friend and we love you Sunset, really. Unless you screw up, even with the best intentions, in which case you are the absolute worst and we hate you.
Are you gonna cover the Anon-A-Miss arc in this later on too? Assuming Sunset lives long enough to see it.
What can I say, frustration trumps common thought and care. But still, they just had that friendship talk and no one had the foresight that "Hey, telling a suicidal-depressed girl that she is useless and that she ruins stuff is totally a good idea" media.giphy.com/media/M8K9mzvyxbnVu/giphy.gif
I wonder who the mystery girl is though, I have a few ideas but I´ve been surprised before. One last thing though, why do you torture me with these goddamn, well placed cliffhangers??? images.gr-assets.com/hostedimages/1401466615ra/9806453.gif
I really hope they are able to help Sunset get through this. How her friends treated her is just despicable and wrong. I really hope Twilight chews them out for this.
The pace seems a little off. I dunno really. I take the story somewhat personal (though my experience is way different than Sunset's and probably not that bad). I find a weird comfort in emotional pain, and the story looks juuuust a little too fast to synchronize with my feelings-pace-whatever-I-have-no-idea-how-to-call-that. Which, of course, has nothing to do with you. But maybe my subjective POV might help to properly balance the pace, so the story feels more immersive. Unless it's not your intention at all and my comment is utterly useless.
8076201 I'm still trying to get pacing portion of my fics just right. I will say that as of the writing of this comment the first scene in the next chapter is over 650 words and is still not finished. So it's definitely slowed down some.
8075087 can I ask you soemthign I told them about this number in your story about this hot like they said I can't call it they say as soon as I do they will just come and send me to an mental place is that too will they just scoop me up and lock me up have me in a bed and strap me to it and all I can do I just lay there and maybe watch a bit of TV is that is it is that true
8078808 I think it all depends on what you tell them. All but one of the times I've called they talked to me to calm me down. They only sent someone one of the times I called and that was when I laid out what I was planning to do. I never went to the hospital but the state police did call me the next couple days to check up on me.
8079012 well each time I can feel it I get closer and closer to well ...that time you about to ....you know I havnt tried to really hurt myself but I can feel myself slipping if this keeps I I know its only a matter of time till I snap I can feel it. Butthats it I know theirs Still time Everytime I talk to my family it just ends up with them yelling I try to keep myself I ncheck but theirs only so many time you can hear the same nonsence over and over they say "its all in the mind I have to change how I think" ITS NOT AL LI NTHE MIND ITS THEM THEIR PART OF THE PROBLEM THEY JUST MAYIT WORSE BY BEING EMPATHIC NOT LISTENING OR EVEN TRYIGN TO HELP ME THEY SAY AL LTHE NEGATIVE STUFF I SAY IS NONSCEN AND THEY DONT WA NT OTHEAR IT WELL WHAT ELSE AM I SUPPOSED TO DO KEEP IT INSIDE THATS WHYA IV BEEN DOING ALL 24 YEARS ITS LIEK IT REALLY WILL TAKE MY DEATH TO CONVINCE THEM
I told my mother my Friends agree she says it just because their my same age and they are in their 20s and she said when were 40 we wont think the same her exact words. Such wonderful understanding family I say I need help they say I'm gonna get locked up in a looney bin arnt they just the best
This is what it feels like every time. Every. Time. Please, if you are someone who is like Sunset, like me, call the hotline. It's saved my life before and it can save yours. Please.
8195507 Yeah, me too. I tend to come back to this story if I'm feeling that way again. It moves me, and it just.. it helps. I won't say you haven't saved my life, because you have. Thanks.
"We are sooo sorry, darling," Rarity whispered in a comforting tone. "Please accept our sincerist apology."
DAMN i know the context but rarity sounds sarcastic. Honestly, i don't even mind it. Even if she didn't realize, it hurts to get treated like that. And "Soooo sorry" doesn't always cut it
She got caught can't blame her though they did lash out at her after saying they do care for her. Liars.
Then Twilight does nothing so much for the Princess of Friendship. (Including Anon-A-Miss)
I hope whoever found Sunset cutting herself can help her.
I wonder exactly why these girls qualified for the elements of harmony to begin with. They are lousy at friendship. And at learning lessons.
Sure, you're our friend and we love you Sunset, really. Unless you screw up, even with the best intentions, in which case you are the absolute worst and we hate you.
Are you gonna cover the Anon-A-Miss arc in this later on too? Assuming Sunset lives long enough to see it.
What can I say, frustration trumps common thought and care. But still, they just had that friendship talk and no one had the foresight that "Hey, telling a suicidal-depressed girl that she is useless and that she ruins stuff is totally a good idea" media.giphy.com/media/M8K9mzvyxbnVu/giphy.gif
I wonder who the mystery girl is though, I have a few ideas but I´ve been surprised before. One last thing though, why do you torture me with these goddamn, well placed cliffhangers??? images.gr-assets.com/hostedimages/1401466615ra/9806453.gif
8075549 Trust me, they'll help her.
8075605
More than likely not. Although I may do a vague reference later if the plot allows.
8075610 Best question I've ever had:
It's just my writing style, sorry.
And spoiler alert the girl who caught Sunset is a surprise.
8075665
U lil shit.
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I really hope they are able to help Sunset get through this. How her friends treated her is just despicable and wrong. I really hope Twilight chews them out for this.
8075782 It doesn't mean I won't continue reading this. Just wanted to let you know so you don't get in trouble.
8075862 I know. That's why I double checked the ratings.
8075800
The pace seems a little off. I dunno really. I take the story somewhat personal (though my experience is way different than Sunset's and probably not that bad). I find a weird comfort in emotional pain, and the story looks juuuust a little too fast to synchronize with my feelings-pace-whatever-I-have-no-idea-how-to-call-that. Which, of course, has nothing to do with you. But maybe my subjective POV might help to properly balance the pace, so the story feels more immersive. Unless it's not your intention at all and my comment is utterly useless.
Sigh...
Looking forward to the next chapter.
8076201 I'm still trying to get pacing portion of my fics just right. I will say that as of the writing of this comment the first scene in the next chapter is over 650 words and is still not finished. So it's definitely slowed down some.
8075665 Touché you cheeky little minx , you´ve duped me twice in one day... my brain can´t handle the excitement!media.giphy.com/media/BjPkaJgnsrJ7i/giphy.gif
I swear to god its always rainbow dash who causes problems its never really any body else its always her
8076393 Sorry. I couldn't help it.
8076427 That comes with the territory of having a massive ego.
8075087 can I ask you soemthign I told them about this number in your story about this hot like they said I can't call it they say as soon as I do they will just come and send me to an mental place is that too will they just scoop me up and lock me up have me in a bed and strap me to it and all I can do I just lay there and maybe watch a bit of TV is that is it is that true
8078808 I think it all depends on what you tell them. All but one of the times I've called they talked to me to calm me down. They only sent someone one of the times I called and that was when I laid out what I was planning to do. I never went to the hospital but the state police did call me the next couple days to check up on me.
8079012 well each time I can feel it I get closer and closer to well ...that time you about to ....you know I havnt tried to really hurt myself but I can feel myself slipping if this keeps I I know its only a matter of time till I snap I can feel it. Butthats it I know theirs Still time Everytime I talk to my family it just ends up with them yelling I try to keep myself I ncheck but theirs only so many time you can hear the same nonsence over and over they say "its all in the mind I have to change how I think" ITS NOT AL LI NTHE MIND ITS THEM THEIR PART OF THE PROBLEM THEY JUST MAYIT WORSE BY BEING EMPATHIC NOT LISTENING OR EVEN TRYIGN TO HELP ME THEY SAY AL LTHE NEGATIVE STUFF I SAY IS NONSCEN AND THEY DONT WA NT OTHEAR IT WELL WHAT ELSE AM I SUPPOSED TO DO KEEP IT INSIDE THATS WHYA IV BEEN DOING ALL 24 YEARS ITS LIEK IT REALLY WILL TAKE MY DEATH TO CONVINCE THEM
I told my mother my Friends agree she says it just because their my same age and they are in their 20s and she said when were 40 we wont think the same her exact words. Such wonderful understanding family I say I need help they say I'm gonna get locked up in a looney bin arnt they just the best
This is what it feels like every time.
Every. Time.
Please, if you are someone who is like Sunset, like me, call the hotline. It's saved my life before and it can save yours. Please.
8195444 Glad to see someone else that's been helped by the hotline.
8195507
Yeah, me too. I tend to come back to this story if I'm feeling that way again. It moves me, and it just.. it helps. I won't say you haven't saved my life, because you have. Thanks.
8204686 You're welcome.
8355743 i was going through some similar feelings as I was writing this particular story.
(Sniff) I’m so proud of you, Sunset.
8827125
She had the guts to tackle the shit out of Dash when everyone else watching the movie wanted to. Respect.
I for some reason, really like this chapter, it's relatable
10225657
You're not alone.
DAMN i know the context but rarity sounds sarcastic.
Honestly, i don't even mind it.
Even if she didn't realize, it hurts to get treated like that.
And "Soooo sorry" doesn't always cut it