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Good first chapter, but I noticed a small typo,
"be" should be "me".
Why do I have a feeling that this time Richter and Annerose are going to at least go on a date once during this story?
I miss asshole Luna... And Luna's asshole
Hey Neko. The reboot is really interesting for me, especially since it solves a lot of the flaws in Richter's character (the fact the he was built to be a complete and utter failure compared to everyone else in the story with any real power, why he was never trained in the first place, etc.) but keeps the main parts of the character we know (womanizing, (well we haven't actually seen that yet, but it's implied), no magical powers, bond with Grael). I'm really looking forward to where this goes.
Also, to everyone in the last chapter who was commenting on wanting Svea back in the story. The entire quest is about killing a white scaled, old, Narrowscale Dragon. Who do we know from the original Lineage that fits that description? Hmm... (I actually had to go back and make sure on the scale color, but there you go.)
So is Annerose gonna be the one he actually falls in love with, or will the date they're having (I have to presume so, Richter was ogling and Annerose was blushing) be awkward as hell?
OH DAMN Will Annerose go with Zane? I have so many theories.
Yea I feel that this is not going to go as planned. So what will Richter not get, the army or the mage?
I honestly hope that, even in the retelling, that Svea and Richter get together. Cause to be honest I really liked their relationship(weird rage at each other not withstanding) and it felt nice to see Richter with a woman that genuinely loved him even if she sometimes didn't want to deal with his bull shit.
But anyways the reboot is going great man, keep up the god work
Dam, i dont know how you did it but im enjoying this more than the last one. Really interested in seeing how the fight with the narrowscale pans out
I got a feeling Richter will either get separated from his party or accidentally run into Svea and end up laying the dragon.
7983257 No problem! And there's no need to worry about my death being an accident with stuff like this around.
The more streamlined character introductions and plot setup feel more natural, I'm looking forward to seeing this play out.
Not sure if I like Stern but loving Luna more than Ball busting Luna, but there's plenty of time to make a decision, I'm sure.
7984060 JUST a warning, because I know that you're shitting around (and hope that you know that I'm shitting around with the killing myself), but even jokingly encouraging somebody to kill themselves is a bad idea.
Still despise everything about this story, but your personality is fun.
7983483 The former? Good riddance. That latter? There's still time.
7983547 It could be the mother.
7983616 neither?
"The best-laid plans of mice and men often go awry."
7984060 I'm also very well aware that I brought it up, and that anybody causing a fuss about it would be retarded, but I've seen people banned for less and I'd hate to lose a good sport like yourself for dumb shit.
7984091 Not surprised at all. Honestly, I wish more people that wrote garbage had a decent tolerance for crap instead of being whiny babies. It makes random, inane comments like my first spark fun banter between people that would never get along for their content and instead for the back and forths.
So Celestia isn't MC's grandmother in this reboot?
7984128 Fo rizzle! It's sad, but that's just the way people are, especially nowadays.
Hell, if it wasn't for the fact of the entirety of the content of the story, I'd probably have given it a read after all this. You obviously know the basic functions of sentence structure and grammar, judging by your comments, so you already have that going on above the majority of other fics along this line. Plus, you've provided me with entertainment outside of just rage-quitting the internet like so many others would. There is still the whole issue of subject matter, though. Personally, I'd remove my dislike if I could, but, for whatever reason, we don't have the option of changing our minds and just striking our judgement from the system and I refuse to change it to a like, because I do not.
That said, I've cluttered up your comment section enough. While I don't quite wanna see this prosper, you keep doing you. I'll overlook stuff in the future, assuming I remember this longer than a week down the road. Try not to contribute to possible failure, as it were.
7984197 I meant that I would try not to contribute, but feel free to take it as you will.
Starting to sound pretty shady. I understand the logic behind the trial but this seems more like an assassination attempt then a rite. An ancient sentient being who is bothering no one in a remote location is designated for death, never minding the fact there are as likely plenty of other vicious monsters out there with no sapience. Curious.
7984247 is Richter still an Incubus in this version???????
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Paranoia is an unfortunate side effect of dealing with Hell my friend. Every relationship goes through challenges and through adversity we grow stronger. Not to mention these mental gymnastics keep me interested in the story.
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I prefer the term 'differently rational'.
Not trying to get under your skin, just trying to understand the motivations of your characters and hopefully make an educated guess where the story is going.
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Anyway, nice chat as always. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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in this version he isn't a fan of sex and has a small penis
Awwwww sheeeeeeiiiiit now it's turning into The Expendables up in this bitch. Also if somebody had roofied Annerose, I hope Richter would have sent them back home in a body bag. No one touches Annerose. She too kyoot. RichterxAnnerose=all of my yes.
7984924 I doubt he has a tiny dick
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Probs a lot smaller compared to last time.
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tfw you realize annerose aint gon be fuckable til chapter 69 and til rik-boi is lvl 69