Reboot! Looking forward to seeing a newer rendition of Lineage.

...Well, I like it.

Okay, I like this version of Lineage better so far. Ritcher seems to be far more mature than his counterpart and I liked his interactions with his family, particularly the dulcet scene and the speech scene (laughed when he mentioned Blueblood).

Great start! Looking forward to more!

Good first chapter, excited for the ones to come!

This is a fantastic start Can't wait to see more.

Wow sad to see the original go. Let's see where the reboot goes.

Okay.... You better continue this you fucking muppet. It's too good to die. Hope to see more soon!

Question do you take inspiration fromfrom the Witcher series for this story due to the fact that both Richter and Geralt hate dressing up also alot of the creatures seem similat

Hooray another porn fic for me to ignore and pretend I read, I'm just here to shitpost.
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Well so far I'm impressed. I can tell that this version already much more refined than its predecessor and look forward to the coming chapters. My only question is if it will have the same base storyline as the original version of Lineage or is this gonna be completely new storyline? The answer won't change me reading the story or not. By good job with this reboot so far, I'm looking forward to great things.

My god johnson, what have you done! This is an amazing first chapter.

I like it. Loved the original, so I really hope this one is good. If Svea isn't in it I'm gonna shit a brick tho

This is an extremely good start to the story, much better than the original. Cannot wait for whats to come!
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And not the incest part, but thoses kinky dagonesses and nekos! Oh, spoilers I guess for those just joining?

My god, you got featured! This is extremely awesome! I'm loving the new Richter. I look forward to more!

7978061 awesome im looking forward to this story also yay for Annerose being in the picture super early

The old adage applies here;

Hate to see you go, love to watch you leave.

*sigh*
Blueblood just gets no respect. So, Richter grew up knowing Annerose and Zane this time? And Zane is trying to be a knight? Richter actually wants to train? Cadance is the one that gets easily unhinged when things don't go her way? Wow, this is already very different than the last version. Hopefully, I can keep up this time.

I have to ask...

You have

last male Alicorn

paired with

my mother, Princess Cadance, and my father, Shining Armour

which seems like a very strange distinction. Is Shining Armour an alicorn in this? Because if he's not, then male alicorns can apparently come from non-alicorn males, so it doesn't seem like there should be a problem eventually having more. And even if Shining is, then what's the problem with Richter making more?

It reads like he's the only male alicorn who will ever now be, and I can't imagine an explanation that isn't at least somewhat arbitrary.

GODDAMNIT I REGRET READING THROUGH THE COMMENTS!

You put a warning for this fix? Holy shit what has the world come to? WHO ARE YOU?!?

Unified Kingdoms
proud of your british heritage, much?
SO AM I!

But im not gonna lie, i wish you at least finished the current Arc in the Original Lineage.
i even had the perfect line as a closer.

and thus, this is just another day in Richters' family,
his Lineage.

That first chapter was a good ass start to the reboot of this story. Keep up the good work. And just wondering, will Richter's sister (cannot remember her name) be in the story too?

But what good is an ornate pommel if you can't unscrew it to end your enemies rightly with it.

7979949 you clearly have never been hit in the face with a pommel.
no matter how ornate, it still hurts like hell.

I like that you did the most important character introductions right in the first chapter. I only made it through the first 20 chapters of the original, but I can still tell that this is a good start.

Definitely more to the point than the original. Hope to see Svea come back.

Luna was indeed a stern woman, but... I'd be a liar if I said I didn't appreciate her keeping me on the straight and narrow at least a little bit.

*stops*
*looks again*
*is amazed*

I like Richter Mk 2.0 better than the original already. I'm also wondering how you're going to handle the mass incest this time around, since it doesn't look like Shining's been a dick of a father this time, nor does it look like he's going to die any time soon, and these were two of the main things that made him okay with the fact that Richter was fucking Cadance.

i like it

Yo this is pretty good.

ok what are we looking at here? Is it all humane? or anthro? wings and horns? what about skin coloration? like humanes or like every color under the rainbow?

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Well the first half is mainly human skin tones with the more anthro types having more varied colors. The newest section is far more anthro.