"I didn't ask you I asked her," I said looking at Celestia before pointing at Luna.
OH I love it if they don'T just back down on what they want and even in front of Celestia.
There are always things to say against it and to show how good it was, but yes Celestia has put her on the moon. It is just always odd that she completely talks about it like someone else did it.
surrounding him was all of his mates
which probably weren't told that he was there.
OKay I have to be honest, while I liked the idea at first, it starts to be a strange thing of the story to have sex at every possible moment with all of them and everything. It could still be because they joined each other in a relationship so suddenly I don't know.
"You may be Aunty Luna's son and ruler of the second largest Diamond Dog territory but don't expect me to bow to you but," He said looking over to my mates. I will show the ladies of your house respect," He said bowing his head to them.
The way he described him I expected much worse.
Aaaaahhhh it has been a long time since I saw the Changeling immitating Cadance with her power of the "feels". Not sure if there is some sort of "holy information" that shows she can do that, but she and Shining are kind of a...whats the word.......I don't always like them.
So what should they do should they stop right there and just walk away staying as cousins. Or should they go with what Luna had said? I will give it a week before I post the next chapter is it,
I vote for "friends, not because I dislike Cadance, but it where already to many Diamond Dog Wifes to my liking and I'm normally against to many characters or to big harem like relationships.
Im actually a fan of cadenceΓOC, they always have some cool outcomes. I say let her join his herd, they can make beautiful powerful foals together, erm sorry i meant music together.
what rikusorasephiroth said, friend first and family later. (or maybe friends with benefits if Candens feeling horny and really like the thought of somebody with the stamina for a alicorn's sex drive, later family?.)
Just to spite shining have him walk in on rou, cadence and twilight right at the end of the mating so he can smirk in his direction as he's done breeding them both.
Canonically, Shining Armor has never expressed anything but support for non-ponies.
I don't recall the name of the cliche, but what you're doing is having your personal dislike for a character manifest as reprehensible behavior on their part.
This was a downright unpleasant turn of events to read, entirely because it's so ham-fisted and pointless. I don't even like Shining Armor, and I found this distasteful. The only way this would work would be if it's part of a plot by Chrysalis, and Shining Armor is unaware.
Also, yes, him romancing Cadence would be scandalous. Blood relation or no.
Oh damn it so much wasted story telling potential ... Like the saying βshow don't tell" Boom story start 1 year later when he appeared on this world. Totally fair for starting a story but eh? The character/characters development totally missed out. About the build of how these main 6 and others are your spin/take of them to this story. And how they can bounce off one another or mix well. And now we learn a beta plot about corrupt/abusive/racist shining armor and the royal guards?! That have been happening from the start?! Maybe even before rougarou appeared, too criminals and other races?
You have so much potential to show more of how rougarou handeled the abuse from shining and others but... But... You went for "it happened"... But hoping the story telling gets better later and the newer releases. Hmmmm blueblood wasn't that dislikeble in this one hmm. Grow author! Develop your writing skills! And appear on "Freatured"!?
8479451 Why do I look at that photo and see a weird level of cuteness and a mature sexiness from it? It make me uncomfortable. Should I hug it and treat it like my daughter or should I blush? Like WTF.
The only problem I have is the Grammar mistakes. But, thankfully, I could still understand it. Good story, though.
Family
Go with choice B. It's not incest if they are not blood related.
One kick shinings butt two him and cadence πππππππππππ
What Lulu said.
Omg. That ending was funny as he'll, I'd say go with lunas advice but make it be one of those awkwerd, funny moments. πππ
Ship it do it do it omg the Crystal kingdom is going to be awesome with him and his pack as it's head woot.
2 things:
1) Go for family!
2) You desperately need an editor to check your grammar.
That is all.
I say fuck Shining Armor I hope she joins his herd and please let Twilight join to that would be awesome and cute.
what Luna said
Letβs see
What Master king said
Family and I hope Shining Armor gets his ass whooped by Luna, Celestia, Twilight, and Cadance, cause he is just fucked now.
Can you do more please
family all the way
Family
OH I love it if they don'T just back down on what they want and even in front of Celestia.
There are always things to say against it and to show how good it was, but yes Celestia has put her on the moon. It is just always odd that she completely talks about it like someone else did it.
which probably weren't told that he was there.
OKay I have to be honest, while I liked the idea at first, it starts to be a strange thing of the story to have sex at every possible moment with all of them and everything. It could still be because they joined each other in a relationship so suddenly I don't know.
The way he described him I expected much worse.
Aaaaahhhh it has been a long time since I saw the Changeling immitating Cadance with her power of the "feels".
Not sure if there is some sort of "holy information" that shows she can do that, but she and Shining are kind of a...whats the word.......I don't always like them.
I vote for "friends, not because I dislike Cadance, but it where already to many Diamond Dog Wifes to my liking and I'm normally against to many characters or to big harem like relationships.
Join his herd!!
Join the herd
Join the herd never liked shining armor
Im actually a fan of cadenceΓOC, they always have some cool outcomes. I say let her join his herd, they can make beautiful powerful foals together, erm sorry i meant music together.
Have Cadance join the pack.
I ship them both Buck shining armor put them together like Luna said
If by friend you mean they get together and bang each other so hard the pony' s at ponyville hear it than ya that one.
Don't over-complicate things by adding Cadance at the moment.
Shining may be an ultimate cockbite, but it's complicated enough with him needing to learn to control his abilities and manage his current mates.
Definitely have her dump Shining, but leave adding her to the pack until things have smoothed out some with his INTERNAL conflicts.
what rikusorasephiroth said, friend first and family later.
(or maybe friends with benefits if Candens feeling horny and really like the thought of somebody with the stamina for a alicorn's sex drive, later family?.)
Is there a reason why my comment was deleted? And the paragraph still needs editing.
Just to spite shining have him walk in on rou, cadence and twilight right at the end of the mating so he can smirk in his direction as he's done breeding them both.
8476643
that would be awesome.
8476643
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Both options have their perks, so I leave it in your hands.
It is your story, after all.
Canonically, Shining Armor has never expressed anything but support for non-ponies.
I don't recall the name of the cliche, but what you're doing is having your personal dislike for a character manifest as reprehensible behavior on their part.
This was a downright unpleasant turn of events to read, entirely because it's so ham-fisted and pointless. I don't even like Shining Armor, and I found this distasteful.
The only way this would work would be if it's part of a plot by Chrysalis, and Shining Armor is unaware.
Also, yes, him romancing Cadence would be scandalous. Blood relation or no.
I would love to see cadance in his pack and see shining armor get his karma. :3
let's get them were-ponies out here
Do it.
Is this going to be a story that tears Shining Armor and Cadance apart? If so, I'm out.
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When you said that it reminded me of a picture I saw a while back and well, I was thinking of something like this but with her normal fur mane and tail colors plus her wings and a horn minus the wood.
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/20/d3/14/20d3140b624f1d20b99b47fd7c07fe79--timber-wolf-werewolf.jpg
Hows that for a Werepony?
Go with what Luna said
8479451
that could be interesting
Remeber incest is wincest
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Would you rather he continue being a HORRIBLE pony, if so, you are welcome to leave
Oh damn it so much wasted story telling potential ... Like the saying βshow don't tell"
Boom story start 1 year later when he appeared on this world. Totally fair for starting a story but eh? The character/characters development totally missed out. About the build of how these main 6 and others are your spin/take of them to this story. And how they can bounce off one another or mix well.
And now we learn a beta plot about corrupt/abusive/racist shining armor and the royal guards?! That have been happening from the start?! Maybe even before rougarou appeared, too criminals and other races?
You have so much potential to show more of how rougarou handeled the abuse from shining and others but... But... You went for "it happened"...
But hoping the story telling gets better later and the newer releases.
Hmmmm blueblood wasn't that dislikeble in this one hmm.
Grow author! Develop your writing skills! And appear on "Freatured"!?
8479451
Why do I look at that photo and see a weird level of cuteness and a mature sexiness from it? It make me uncomfortable. Should I hug it and treat it like my daughter or should I blush? Like WTF.