There are quite a few words that are misspelled here... Maybe you should check it three or four times... Just put it on google drive or something and you will see all the spelling mistakes.
That was mostly a sweet and cute chapter I can't wait for the next,but you don't have to rush.I hope that Twilight and Cadance will join at the sane time.I can't wait to see what happens nexr,
rofl soon shining ass will be out of comrades and then he might get cornered and do something stupid and off to the jail for him then court and finally prison and as punishment please make him be turned into an earth pony mare and put into a preeminent heat then thrown into an all male prison and tell all who are in there as long as she doesn't die you can do anything you want
not sure how to feel about twilight joining. yay were-alicorns are go! also I think there are a couple words that didn’t get finished so a little grammar check. keep up the good work loving the story.
The errors aside I like this story. The way you've tied it all together is very creative. Love the twist where Luna is Rou's mother but I have a question that's been bugging me. if he was conceived when she was Nightmare Moon, then Luna was banished to the moon for 1000 years...how the heck does he not know he's over a millennia old? over 1000 years have passed but he acts like it was just a blink of an eye. how?
This is the only plot hole that stood out to me and is making my brain hurt trying to figure it out.
8676671 Ok I know I didn't cover this in the story or any of my other ones but the answer to it is both magic and time. When Luna opened the portal to Earth she was under the influence of Nightmare Moon but was not taken over by it. Now about the time difference, I am going to sound all sciencey here but time moves at a different speed in different dimensions. Rou was born in 1990 when he arrived in Equestria it was at or around the beginning of 2010 that would make him 20. Now if you consider, that for roughly every 50 years on Equestria 1 year passing on Earth then it would seem plausible to why (internal groan) you know what I just going to stick with my first answer and say magic.
"Only time will tell my friend, come sit let me tell you tonights special, oh, for you ladies my name is Bar, Bar-B-Que," Bar said leading us to a secluded table.
There are quite a few words that are misspelled here... Maybe you should check it three or four times... Just put it on google drive or something and you will see all the spelling mistakes.
Whoo boy. Now twilight. Damn Rou. Noice. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I noticed a few spelling errors and one capitalization error, but there are tons upon metric TONS of punctuation errors
That was mostly a sweet and cute chapter I can't wait for the next,but you don't have to rush.I hope that Twilight and Cadance will join at the sane time.I can't wait to see what happens nexr,
Soooo close darn it I can almost feel it coming, I can’t wait for shinning armor to get caught red handed by Celestia and punished for it.
rofl soon shining ass will be out of comrades and then he might get cornered and do something stupid and off to the jail for him then court and finally prison and as punishment please make him be turned into an earth pony mare and put into a preeminent heat then thrown into an all male prison and tell all who are in there as long as she doesn't die you can do anything you want
the twisted mind of taelonso speaks
Like the new chapter a few spelling mistakes and when did Twilight start liking him and what are they going to do about shining armor.
more chapters please
Omg 2 mares for the price of one yes plz keep it up loving it
not sure how to feel about twilight joining. yay were-alicorns are go! also I think there are a couple words that didn’t get finished so a little grammar check. keep up the good work loving the story.
Good job can't wait for the next chapter
Omg, I like how the concept of this story is unique and how it's progressing. Please do keep up the excellent work. ;)
Just want to say... I am the 400th person to like this story... Congrats!
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Thank you very much for that here have a Pinkie.
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The errors aside I like this story. The way you've tied it all together is very creative. Love the twist where Luna is Rou's mother but I have a question that's been bugging me. if he was conceived when she was Nightmare Moon, then Luna was banished to the moon for 1000 years...how the heck does he not know he's over a millennia old? over 1000 years have passed but he acts like it was just a blink of an eye. how?
This is the only plot hole that stood out to me and is making my brain hurt trying to figure it out.
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Ok I know I didn't cover this in the story or any of my other ones but the answer to it is both magic and time. When Luna opened the portal to Earth she was under the influence of Nightmare Moon but was not taken over by it. Now about the time difference, I am going to sound all sciencey here but time moves at a different speed in different dimensions. Rou was born in 1990 when he arrived in Equestria it was at or around the beginning of 2010 that would make him 20. Now if you consider, that for roughly every 50 years on Equestria 1 year passing on Earth then it would seem plausible to why (internal groan) you know what I just going to stick with my first answer and say magic.
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It's all wibbely-wobbely-timeie-wimie stuff.
More please and soon
someone forgot to turn off swag I wonder who it is
LOL