*Blink*

So...She can still influence the world in some manner while petrified?
Make sense, I suppose. Goddess of Light and all that "No one can escape from The Light" stuff.

So...Will "Pit" & "Dark Pit" makes any appearance, or is it just her?
Questions still remains though...Especially about the show's events. How much of a derailment this will make?

All said, I am eager to see how her becoming normal and regaining full power will affect the status quo.

Now, onward to the show's premiere.

7677635 yep she can, though it's to a limited degree.
I won't spoil about pit and pitoo, but I will say there will be derailment and Palutena will not be relegated to support like in the games and will have access to all the powers and abilities she has displayed in kid Icarus uprising and super smash Bros Wii u and the anime.

very good start, also nice job in giving Twilight the jeebies on Palutena's veracity

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"relegated to support" What does this means, exactly? I ran this through google translate and came up with a mess. English isn't my native language.
That she is not as worshipped, or that she will deal with events in a more "up close and personal" manner? If it is more up-close, than that would make your uses of the powers more revelant, I suppose.

7677895 oh apologies, it means that she was left to a mere helping role rather than on the front lines of combat (besides a few instances where she fought pit in the game.) Off screen support, helping pit fly, Using the palutena glam blaster on hewdraw, navigation, information gathering, providing power and recovery items etc.

7677905 Oh...So she will crush her enemies, see them driven before her, and hear the lamentations of their soon-to-be-eliminated supporters in this story instead of a supporting role like in the game...Ok, gotcha.
Thanks for clarifying..

I would've add this at the end if I was in her place

7677938 your welcome :3

7677970 that wasn't a good song lol

Trolling hath begun

Palutena is a great troll

7677993 I don't like it either, that was just what google give me when I typed in

how to be an adventure i smite you

If you want to know where it's from a show called how to be an adventurer

7678033 when isn't she?

the rules of the internet are universal.

Hmmmmmm...

the rules of the internet are multiversal.

There. I fixed it for you.

*Paused after reading the first paragraph*

How could I forget, of course the singing would fucking work, it would've counted as a goddamn heart song

*Continues reading*

Now this, is an AU. Interfering with the world while still imprisoned, there were plenty of god-like being as other displaced but they've never taken to this as a way to pass time or spread influence. While I too would regret like the MC, for changing the world to something on this scale, it is the ultimate fate for most worlds where a human appears.

Moving onwards

7678280 BBBBUUUUUTTTT IT'S A GOOD SONG D: and also that's an abridged series A GOOD ONE AT THAT XD

I'm gonna be honest here, so much doesn't make sense to me. Why did Celestia fall in love with her? I mean, I'm sure she'd feel bad about it, but love? Maybe if Tia was so lonely she had some idealized version of Palutena to latch onto, but other than that I don't see it.

Also, I have no problem with extremely different AU's, but exactly HOW did Palutena cause all these changes? I mean I get that Palutena can apparently telepathically communicate, but going so far as to inadvertently cause ponies to be more accepting of the different, introduce Metal, cause Magitech to be born, have the pegasi drop weather control, cause them to discover themselves to be omnivorous, and develop a more warrior culture? That's a bit much by her presence alone, and unless I missed it I didn't read about her picking ponies to communicate with and influence. I have no problem with this world you created, but the reasons and methods behind its creation seem a bit ridiculous to me.

And finally, and I think this bugs me more as an English major, why does the story switch from first to third person in the middle of the chapter? I mean, sure you could've been doing that on purpose for some reason I don't understand yet, but if you're going to break the rules of story writing there better be a damn good reason.

Ugh... I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be negative here, it's just that a lot of the things in this chapter were kinda glaring and really took me out of the experience. I hope this criticism can be constructive to you.

Anyway, I'll come back to this later and try reading the rest.

I laughed so hard at the Twilight part lol

se salta varios detalles pero apenas comienza, seguir leyendo

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Twilight fell apart

twilight reaction is so funny still