Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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7775834 er she still knows she was raped, she still knows she is no longer a virgin, Palutena only took the subconscious memory of how it happened while she was under the roofies effect.
7777254 That's... actually worse
To either take the memory and leave the emotional trauma or taking the trauma and leaving the memory, by doing so you leave the seed for her subconscious imagination or emotions to fill the gaps, and that's much more terrifying.
Emotions and memory are so intrinsic to one another that even those with amnesia can have panic attacks, in the want to fill blanks. To know you've suffered but to be detached or to not remember but feel that something terrible happened, psychological or emotional shifts can happen. To take away the emotion, the trauma from Rarity, to detach her personally from her suffering, you stripped away the typical emotions associated- fear, despair, shame- and made her view everything like a film, made her view everything clinically.
With the overriding emotions usurped, the atypical emotions that wouldn't have surfaced till later can now take the forefront, as you've bypassed her need to take the steps of grief or coping with her circumstances. Anger, vengeance, murderous intent. so many variations that could turn her into a psychopath, hell, she might not even feel hostility and see this as an opportunity to take power as nobility or Blueblood's title.
The possibilities are nearly endless, it's like you've turned her into a freight train with the cargo unhitched. At the end of the ride, will there be a derailment, a loud crash or nothing at all
Deeper thoughts, into a story's direction, are too often ignored, so as to forcibly steer in the direction they wish, those become wrecks
7777254 Finished reading the chapter, never mind, you've already relinquished it all to her
when did she become a goddess of Darkness, Balance and be able to become a dragon and be known as a dragoness of balance? because that kinda came out of left field. now if this chapter had come out after she absorbed Pandora and Harmony it would of made more sense. in my opinion at least. but no matter great chapter as always!
What's going on?????
Since this little arc started the GGG, stuff has apparently happened that wasn't filled in here and now the main character has these abilities that didn't exist, isn't preggers and random duels which make no sense and tbh are seriously boring are popping up.
I started reading this a couple of days ago and the first few chapters were good, then the pace picked up and suddenly celly loves main char, luna did bugger all after being asked to remove the petrification curse, and the main character got pregnant. The pacing has gone out the window along with logic.
Am I the only one getting seriously confused with these time jumps?
7778441 No, you're not the only one. I'm having a bit of buyers remorse when I fav'd this, this series felt like it was going somewhere but then cameo after cameo of the other Displaced adding their own shenanigans into this world, it kinda lost its identity. Rin's series at least kept mostly to her world and its problems were her focus until another displaced either calls for help or tries to kill her. Here, it's become muddled in the affairs with others, to the point that it feels like it's no longer the tales of Palutena but a TV channel to viewing another perspective of the Justice league. All of the reform efforts are more in the line of 'obey or die', the foals I think have been forgotten considering the MC heavily stressed she needs to stay an alicorn but suddenly is freely shifting from one form to the next, sorta whoring herself out for business but suddenly doing freebies or unwanted changes for others.
It's turning into a mess
Is she still pregnant because I'm a little lost I was waiting on the twins to be born