A Darkend Rainbow: Chaos Within Harmony

by JustAnotherBadSonicOC

A Silent Dash

Current Setting: Below Rainbow's Cloud Home

Music:Eterna City (NightTime) -Pokemon Diamond/Pearl/Platnium

One late night in Equestria, Rainbow Dash was walking to a meadow not to far from her cloud home. She needed to recuperate from everthing that has happened these last few weeks, Starting with her mother Firefly's death, Then finding her long lost brother Fusion Bolt, The Cutiemark crusaders finally getting their cutie marks, meeting Princess Cadence and Twilight's brother and fighting the Changelings and then the real wedding reception.

She did not know she was being followed by a mysterious stallion. The stallion had been assigned a very important mission, which was to kill the Elements of Harmony. He wanted to kill Twilight Sparkle first but his leader said to get the Element of Loyalty out of the way. Her being pretty damn fast for a Pegasus, no kidding he had seen her fly before, she was pretty damn fast. But that doesn't explain why he wouldn't want the Element of Magic gone first. He saw where her destanation was, perfect a isolated meadow. Real smart of her.

New Setting: Starry Meadow

Music: Emotion ( Pokemon Black/White)

Rainbow walked into her favorite place to go when she needs some alone time or when she is sad or upset.
She heard hoofsteps, " W-w-w-w-who's t-t-t-t-there?" " H-h-h-h-hello? A-a-a-anyone there?" She turned around and remused humming a tune to a slow song. The stallion decided it was time to comence in killing the Element of Loyalty, He got gauze wrap and Wrapped a kife onto his hoof. " Monster, How should i feel? Creatures Lie Here Looking through the Window." He walked up behind her and delivered a fierce blow to her back. " Silent Pain".

Rainbow Let out a ear piercieng scream. " The night he caged her, bruised and broke her, he struggled to get away." But he was held by the cyan Pegasus, She was Beautiful. That's when he decided the easiest way to kill her. " He leaned in and then he stole her" He leaned in and kissed her on the lips. She was in shock, she tried to get away. But right as she was about to break free, she felt something pierce her in the chest. She looked down, she was bleeding. The stallion broke the kiss, he saw what he had wanted. Her body now limp and cold, her eyes showing no sign of life just just... Nothing. "Slowly he saw her nightmare was his dream" He then cut off a lock of each color from her mane and her tail. He looked at her one last time. This time noticing her shocked look. She had truly been scared. But his mission was done, the Element of Loyalty was dead. And she was pretty easy to kill despite her being the fastest goddamn flier in Equestria. He took a bed sheet out of his saddlebag, wrapped her body in it, and he left her body lying in the meadow, not noticing the silver locket in her hoof with 2 heart shapped photos. One of her Friends along with Spike and Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. The other photo of Her and Her brother Fusion Bolt as a little filly and colt with their mother Firefly Dash and their father Fire Flare

Note: Fusion Bolt is a mare actually, but she was genderswapped to be a guy in this story. Just thought i'd clear that up.

Comments

[Rainb0w Dashie]

This is horrible on so many levels!

[Amit]

This has literally every single neckbeard-enraging cliché on the internet.

If this is a troll, I applaud you.

If this is not, I applaud you still.

[IAmScootaloo]

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[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

What is so horrible about it? It was my best yet! My other Stories are Just horrible.

[Firepegasus230]

read few lines...then left....

[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

821652 Wait why? Ok i am a bad person. But this just came to my mind and i couldn't get it outta my mind. So, my upcoming stories won't be like this.

[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

813208 this is most certainly not a troll fic!
Good day my fine friend!

[Firepegasus230]

827056 Oh yeah, I should maybe explain before commenting, sorry RD is my fave pony, I hate the idea of having her murdered but i decided to read the whole thing, Personallly, I don't like the story, but it's super well written

[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

832032 I know, it was hard for me to do this. Cause Rd is my Fav Pony As well. And this is much better than my previous stories. Also, it will get much better.

[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

954079 Oh Yeah? Where!?

[JustAnotherBadSonicOC]

958208Um i don't see any, can you point out a few. I'm sorry it's just, MIcrosoft Word No Longer Works for me beacuse i can't put in the product key thing so i have no way of using Spell check. Also. thanks! This took me a while to write. And i hate the1,000 word minimun to submit it that's why there is song lyrics there.