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Stuff goes down When Rainbow Dash's Body is Found With a Knife Wound In Her Chest. Twilight is shocked to find that one of her closests friends had been Murdered. No one knew who killed her. But They do have some Evidence, With little knowledge of Dash's Killer, and A Small Lock Of Her Mane. Knowing She had probably tried to fight back. But Knowing Cause of Death Would Help. But More Killings Shall Come Later.
Note: My Oc Fusion Bolt Strike Does Make a Appereance in this. But I need an Oc To be Dash's Killer. Slight Romance at the beginning but after that no more romance. Also: The Stallion Aka Dashie's killer will be decided by me. If anyone is willing to make cover art please do, if not i'll try to make it myself.
Note: Putting romance tab beacuse there is some romance.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 28 )

This is horrible on so many levels! :raritydespair:

This has literally every single neckbeard-enraging cliché on the internet.

If this is a troll, I applaud you.

If this is not, I applaud you still.

What is so horrible about it? It was my best yet! My other Stories are Just horrible.

read few lines...then left....:raritydespair:

821652 Wait why? Ok i am a bad person. But this just came to my mind and i couldn't get it outta my mind. So, my upcoming stories won't be like this.

813208 this is most certainly not a troll fic!:twilightsmile:
Good day my fine friend!:pinkiesmile:

827056 Oh yeah, I should maybe explain before commenting, sorry :twilightblush: RD is my fave pony, I hate the idea of having her murdered :flutterrage: but i decided to read the whole thing, Personallly, I don't like the story, but it's super well written :raritystarry:

832032 I know, it was hard for me to do this. Cause Rd is my Fav Pony As well. And this is much better than my previous stories.:pinkiehappy: Also, it will get much better.

958208Um i don't see any, can you point out a few. I'm sorry it's just, MIcrosoft Word No Longer Works for me beacuse i can't put in the product key thing so i have no way of using Spell check.:fluttershysad: Also. thanks! This took me a while to write. And i hate the1,000 word minimun to submit it that's why there is song lyrics there.

moaaaaar, naooooo :flutterrage:when's the rest coming ??

983459 I am Updating it Every Monday if not Tuesday or Wensday. Depends on what my parents plan. But Next part is coming out today!:derpytongue2::pinkiesmile:

999527 Edit: Updating everyday due to school coming up in 3-4 weeks.

I think i know who was speaking, but i won't say anything:raritywink:

1010200 Not much will come out today, Seeing as i am going to be dragged to my brothers doctors appointment. Mom won't let me stay. She can't trust me alone. Beacuse she thinks i'll burn the house down. But do i have yet to? No.

1010181 well you can say now. Seeing as the next chapter is up.:pinkiecrazy:
Also. That damn Stallion is Chuck Norris! And Pinkie got badass with her hacksaw.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
Edit: Changed Pinkie's Hacksaw to an Iron clad Cleaver!

Listen, my father just recently put content advisor on my laptop, so i might no longer be able to put up those lyrics at the begining in other languages.

XiF

>>Putting romance tab beacuse there is some romance.
That would make too much sense, wouldn't it?

1137794 Yeah i know, this chapter was an idea i had while i was at school.

Wow..........just...damn. Poor Spike.

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