It returns, this chapter was an awesome Reason You Suck Speech and I'll be glad that Zack's going to get what he deserves, wish we could send him to my favorite five-faced mechanical aliens and ask them to torment him in the most delightful way to them as possible before they actually execute him.
This story is back!!! I love this update!!! Boy I hope Sunset gets the closure she needs.
And to this day, I still want to do horrible things to Zak. I hope that asshole gets what is coming to him. Yes, what the Rainbooms did was awful, but he, oh man, HE, is the Umbridge of this story.
“Stupid, vain, ungrateful hypocrite!” Rarity cursed herself as her tears washed away her mascara.
“Ah’ can’t believe we did this!” Applejack said horrified and disgusted with herself.
“We had ONE job!” Rainbow yelled tearfully. “Be Sunset Shimmer’s fucking friends!”
“We were supposed to show her how great friendship was!” an extremely upset Pinkie said. “But instead, we showed her just how ugly and terrible humans can truly be! We didn’t just take a page from the Old Sunset Shimmer, we wrote a sequel to her goddamn book!”
“Girls,” Twilight tried to calm them down and get their attention.
“Chapter One: stab your own innocent and best friend in the back for no reason!”
“I want you to promise me that you will be Sunset Shimmer’s friends forever . You must never turn your backs on her of your own free will again. Even if it somehow pits you against me. But if I hear that you’ve broken this promise, not only will I take Sunset back to Equestria anyway, but I will also take the journal, the magic, and permanently seal the portal and cut any and all ties to this world forever . Do I make myself clear?”
No offense, but just ebcuase of her own foolish judgment and social ineptitude, she is willing to cut dies with an ENTIRE dimension because 5 teenagers rubbe sher the wrong way?
God man, that's petty if I've ever seen it.
I understand th punish logic but damn, lil bit outta control there.
“I want you to promise me that you will be Sunset Shimmer’s friends forever . You must never turn your backs on her of your own free will again. Even if it somehow pits you against me. But if I hear that you’ve broken this promise, not only will I take Sunset back to Equestria anyway, but I will also take the journal, the magic, and permanently seal the portal and cut any and all ties to this world forever . Do I make myself clear?”
Okay this is frankly idiotic. Promise? The promised that the first time and broke it without even realizing.
You can't force peace, such a thing only leads to a more brutal war.
You can't force forgiveness either, Sunset is weak of mind, right now. She isn't in ANY state to make her own decisions and this world has clearly done nothing positive to her.
This shouldn't even be a question of taking her back to her world, if Twilight really cared she'd drag her back even if she had to do so while said girl was kicking and screaming.
10358770 Don't worry, Kratus' perfered method is the destruction of the mind which he'll take is time doing so for his own amusement and entertainment.
“Have any of you figured out why you couldn’t use your magic the last time you spoke with her?” Twilight asked. She hoped they’d figured that out on their own by now, but the curious expressions on their faces said otherwise. “Because Sunset truly isn’t your friend anymore. In fact, I doubt she ever was.”
Also you rely on it too much and this is a non magic situation. Were you really gonna rainboom this guy!? I hate him and even I would never wish the elements of harmony on a living soul.
“No you didn’t,” the purple puppy disagreed surprising the five teenage humans. He had a very serious expression on his face. “Back in our world, I used to wet the bed when I was younger. I was so embarrassed and ashamed that sometimes I tried to hide the sheets. How often I got caught or not isn’t the point. The point is you’re all doing the same thing I did. Instead of dealing with your mistake, you’ve been trying to make Sunset and everyone else forget about it and move on as if it never happened. I couldn’t believe you would all do something so stupid and so cruel to Sunset Shimmer, but I never thought you would all try to resolve this issue in such a cowardly way. This goes especially to you, Rainbow Dash.” The little dog’s words dug deeper than a rusty pickaxe. “And as for Dash’s question about ‘how Twilight knew Sunset was innocent’. The answer is ‘Twilight is Sunset’s friend,’ plain and simple. Do real friends believe their friends are innocent until proven guilty?”
Oh I did not know how much we were going to be on the same page. Shit. I'm agreeing with starbutt and her pet. The only thing worse is agreeing with Celestia.
“I want you to promise me that you will be Sunset Shimmer’s friends for real . And if I ever hear that you’ve hurt her like this again, not only will I take Sunset back to Equestria, but I will also take the journal, the magic, and permanently seal the portal and cut any and all ties to this world forever . Do I make myself clear?”
10778215 Even so, it just seems like a really great way to lose a client (and perhaps your license, if Sunset in her mental state is vindictive enough) to go spouting what she said in confidence to the ones that hurt her. Sure, it may be well-intentioned, but it's a very risky move, to say the least.
Personally I drop a tip to the police that I believe zac is using drugs on his girlfriend and abusing her. The fact there are drugs in his possession will catch the cops attention pretty fast. Sunset will need to detox and then spend time in a place where her mental health can be helped. Between the rainbooms and the abuse she has been broken mentally and needs a lot of help.
“Correction,” Twilight counter argued. “You five were my friends during that time and so was Sunset Shimmer. If I wasn’t there the Dazzlings would’ve won without any problem at all. I was the middleman that made that magical moment possible. None of you ever gave her an offer to join the band. And when she did try to help out, you all mercilessly snapped at her!” This made the Five cringe with shame and embarrassment as they remembered that moment.
This doesn't explain how the Rainbooms were able to pony up without Twilight being there earlier in the film.
Do real friends believe their friends are innocent until proven guilty?”
That's a fair point, but Spike appears to be forgetting that Sunset had comprehensively eroded their ability to trust other people for years up to this point. Why are Twilight and Spike so surprised that the Rainbooms have trust issues, not least with a girl who enjoyed wrecking friendships for fun for years?
“Grow up!” Apple Bloom answered bluntly.
Says the girl who threw a temper tantrum and wrecked a person's life when her sister wouldn't play with her.
good news:your back
bad news: I vaguely recall what this story is about and need to recap.
A year and a half later and I still want to kick that Zak guy's ass.
Finally this story returns
It returns, this chapter was an awesome Reason You Suck Speech and I'll be glad that Zack's going to get what he deserves, wish we could send him to my favorite five-faced mechanical aliens and ask them to torment him in the most delightful way to them as possible before they actually execute him.
This story is back!!! I love this update!!! Boy I hope Sunset gets the closure she needs.
And to this day, I still want to do horrible things to Zak. I hope that asshole gets what is coming to him. Yes, what the Rainbooms did was awful, but he, oh man, HE, is the Umbridge of this story.
It's alive!
YES! Welcome back!
Welcome back!
.....I miss Dragonball Abridged.
No offense, but just ebcuase of her own foolish judgment and social ineptitude, she is willing to cut dies with an ENTIRE dimension because 5 teenagers rubbe sher the wrong way?
God man, that's petty if I've ever seen it.
I understand th punish logic but damn, lil bit outta control there.
Okay this is frankly idiotic. Promise? The promised that the first time and broke it without even realizing.
You can't force peace, such a thing only leads to a more brutal war.
You can't force forgiveness either, Sunset is weak of mind, right now. She isn't in ANY state to make her own decisions and this world has clearly done nothing positive to her.
This shouldn't even be a question of taking her back to her world, if Twilight really cared she'd drag her back even if she had to do so while said girl was kicking and screaming.
To infinity and beyond!!!!
Now that's settled, let's go save Sunset and kick Zak ass.
OOH! OOH! OOH! Can i help kick Zak's but.😈
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buzz what r you doing here?
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Save some of him for my Bionicle OC he loves destroying those like Zack.
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fine as long as my klyntar evolved oc gets to eat him in the end
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Don't worry, Kratus' perfered method is the destruction of the mind which he'll take is time doing so for his own amusement and entertainment.
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rampage says thank you
So wens the next chapter?
Sorry for bad inglish
Also you rely on it too much and this is a non magic situation. Were you really gonna rainboom this guy!? I hate him and even I would never wish the elements of harmony on a living soul.
Oh I did not know how much we were going to be on the same page. Shit. I'm agreeing with starbutt and her pet. The only thing worse is agreeing with Celestia.
I would have done it anyways.
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Actually Nevermind.
when's the next chapter
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Almost halfway done.
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Even so, it just seems like a really great way to lose a client (and perhaps your license, if Sunset in her mental state is vindictive enough) to go spouting what she said in confidence to the ones that hurt her. Sure, it may be well-intentioned, but it's a very risky move, to say the least.
Personally I drop a tip to the police that I believe zac is using drugs on his girlfriend and abusing her. The fact there are drugs in his possession will catch the cops attention pretty fast. Sunset will need to detox and then spend time in a place where her mental health can be helped. Between the rainbooms and the abuse she has been broken mentally and needs a lot of help.
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Though Kratus might also torture Zak physically as well meaning there's a chance that he won't be alive by the end.
This doesn't explain how the Rainbooms were able to pony up without Twilight being there earlier in the film.
That's a fair point, but Spike appears to be forgetting that Sunset had comprehensively eroded their ability to trust other people for years up to this point. Why are Twilight and Spike so surprised that the Rainbooms have trust issues, not least with a girl who enjoyed wrecking friendships for fun for years?
Says the girl who threw a temper tantrum and wrecked a person's life when her sister wouldn't play with her.
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Yeah. If it was me, I'd convince everybody who heard and/or witnessed Zak's abuse to tell the police exactly what they'd heard and/or seen
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Me too honestly