In this alternate, futuristic Equestria, a terrorist attack on Shining Armor and Cadence inspires the now older Captain of The Royal Guard to form a new team of heroes and protect Equestria from a new threat that could tear the country apart.
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AWESOME!!!!! Keep 'em coming!
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What did you enjoy the most about this chapter, might I ask?
7528054 Basically, EVERYTHING!!!
7528054
Ok, seriously, I KEEP SEEING STARFIRE WHENEVER I READ FAE'S LINES
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Yep. Though she may act like Starfire, she has possibly one of the most tragic backstories out of all of them. Other than that, good chaper, yes?
7529428
Yep, I honestly didn't expect Shadow Dancer to be an experimental test subject...
Their first mission starts in the next chapter, yes?
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Yep, and her story will only go deeper as the story progresses. And no, there won't be an official all-together first mission until three days have passed. Blaster still needs some training once he gets his new tech, and they haven't had too much time together yet.
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Keeping me on the edge here man...
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Hey, a good action story needs exposition or else it can't be treated seriously. Sorry, but I have to give buildup. Simply racing to the action will just make it feel pointless.
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True... but the waiting tho...!
Ooooooo loved seeing more of the mares backstories. Finally found time to read a bit more. Excellent chapter, loving the build-up. (I for one don't mind more exposition, gives more to the story)
seems kind of heavy handed on the backstory expo there