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I'm not a writer looking to change hearts and minds. I'm just a guy looking to spread a little magic here and there. So, sit back and enjoy the show!

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Who is your favorite OC so far based on the introductions? I'm curious.

Interesting... VERY interesting, I'll be watching this one closely...


Sweet! I hope you enjoy! And, if I may ask, who is your favorite OC so far based on episode two?

7463469 Pretty much all of them! That's how much I love this story!


Oh, wow... your making my head inflate over here... :twilightsheepish:


Ok so...

Gizmo = Gizmo (DC universe)

Shadow Dancer = Susan Storm (Fantastic Four)

Blue Thistle = Zarya (Overwathc, dunno why, but I instantly thought of her.)

Blaster = Raven? (Teen Titans)

Fae = Starfire (She acts just like her!)


I'd say Blaster is more like Firestorm in terms of power type, and yeah, I think you nailed the premise of his powers by comparing him to Raven. As for Blue Thistle, I haven't played Overwatch, but I assume Zarya is a very muscular Russian woman, correct? Gizmo is also a lot more like the Mechromancer from Borderlands 2 if Gaige had OCD and ADHD up the wazoo and was male. And yeah, Fae is pretty much Starfire in terms of personality. I'd also say Shadow Dancer was inspired by Susan Storm,yeah, but I threw in a bit of Deadshot and Black Widow in there as well. As you can tell, I'm a massive nerd. :rainbowlaugh:


True, true... I can't underestimate the glasses.

7463932 I' hoping Twilight will be seen more often than not. even if it's in a support roll rather than combat or even romantic interest.


She'll pop up quite often, though, not as much as Shining Armor or Cadence. If you like Derpy I think you'll appreciate this too! She's gonna be Shining Armor's secretary. :derpytongue2:

Great chapter! Nicely done introductions to the main OC cast, and well I am looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)


Thanks! Who's your favorite out of the OC cast might I add?

Hmmm I'm thinking Blaster so far, but haven't learned enough to know for sure though. All seem well thought out though and with their own uniqueness's.

Let me guess, suicde sqaud was your insperation


Sorta. It was that, and I also recently watched The Avengers (for the 20,000th time).

Sooo what was Fae locked up for agian


Assualting numerous hunters who abused wildlife in Everfree (just roughed em' up a bit). However, due to the fact she was a previously unidentified lifeform and immensely powerful, she was placed in supermax containment with the rest of the Knights for further study.

7464864 this feels like the people of equestria are being hypocrites when it came to practicing frendship (not critisizing don't change what is good writing)


In this reality, many have lost faith in the Elements of Harmony...

7464914 I saw, amd I'm going....really folks you know that Twi and her freinds have saved you several dozens of times, half of the issues would of spelled end of the world and you want to rebel

A small opening in the concrete above the gate shot out two beams of light that shone down on Shining Armor and Twilight, illuminating them both. After a few seconds, the light dimmed, and a robotic voice confirmed their identities. "Confirmed: Princess Twilight Sparkle and Prince Shining Armor. Welcome."

You... you got this from Young Justice, didn't you? :pinkiecrazy:

Also, the Derpy X Blaster and Shadow Dancer X Gizmo ships are currently coming along well I see...


God, I loved that show. I actually forgot about it, but now that I think about it... yeah, you're right. I remember that now. That's a pretty cool coincidence if you ask me. And don't get ahead of yourself with ships... it's only just begun after all. :rainbowdetermined2:

I am also on board for a Derpy x Blaster ship, think they would make a cute couple! Hehe other than that not sure what else to say just yet but keep going, I like it. ^.^


Thanks! I really hope I make each chapter better and better! :twilightsmile:

Commence Comments Review!

Pretty good thus far. I'm not going to go into too much detail, but it's an interesting story. The main thing this story has going for it are the OC characters, which have been crafted very well. All in all, good so far.


Thanks for the lightning-fast review! Wow, usually I never hear an answer from the review groups, but you certainly delivered. Perhaps you could give me some details through pm, if it's not too much to ask?

The old iron man theme song is stuck in my head now when I think of blaster he's gonna be iron stallion


Sort of, but he won't go full iron man; his armor will actually be really clunky and in the way at first, then redused to but a chest piece, gauntlets, and gaiters.

I would like to, but I'm not sure if I'll have the time to do a more in-depth review, with school starting and all. Apologies.


Ah, I get ya. Don't worry. I was just asking for your opinion on each OC is all. I've got school here quick as well. It's cool, man. :twilightsmile:

Blaster and derpy are getting together, come on it's so obvious

First and can't get anoth.of both this story and a few others keep up the good work:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:


Why thank you! I hope I keep you interested in this story! :twilightsmile:

Another quite enjoyable chapter, well done on the action scenes and I look forward to seeing the rest of them be tested. ^.^

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