In this alternate, futuristic Equestria, a terrorist attack on Shining Armor and Cadence inspires the now older Captain of The Royal Guard to form a new team of heroes and protect Equestria from a new threat that could tear the country apart.
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You... you got this from Young Justice, didn't you?
Also, the Derpy X Blaster and Shadow Dancer X Gizmo ships are currently coming along well I see...
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God, I loved that show. I actually forgot about it, but now that I think about it... yeah, you're right. I remember that now. That's a pretty cool coincidence if you ask me. And don't get ahead of yourself with ships... it's only just begun after all.
I am also on board for a Derpy x Blaster ship, think they would make a cute couple! Hehe other than that not sure what else to say just yet but keep going, I like it. ^.^
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Thanks! I really hope I make each chapter better and better!
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You're welcome, and I think you are doing well on that. ^.^
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Pretty good thus far. I'm not going to go into too much detail, but it's an interesting story. The main thing this story has going for it are the OC characters, which have been crafted very well. All in all, good so far.
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Thanks for the lightning-fast review! Wow, usually I never hear an answer from the review groups, but you certainly delivered. Perhaps you could give me some details through pm, if it's not too much to ask?
The old iron man theme song is stuck in my head now when I think of blaster he's gonna be iron stallion
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Sort of, but he won't go full iron man; his armor will actually be really clunky and in the way at first, then redused to but a chest piece, gauntlets, and gaiters.
7489621 okay still gonna play the theme tho
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Don't worry, it's in my head now.
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I would like to, but I'm not sure if I'll have the time to do a more in-depth review, with school starting and all. Apologies.
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Ah, I get ya. Don't worry. I was just asking for your opinion on each OC is all. I've got school here quick as well. It's cool, man.
Blaster and derpy are getting together, come on it's so obvious
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Mmmmmmaayyybeeeee.....
What a cute chapter! I can't wait for the next one! It's obvious that Derpy likes Blaster.
He had THEIR attention.
Visible is in there twice.
Did you mean to write 'tagged back'? I have heard the expression, 'lagged behind', but I have not heard, 'tagged back'. Is it a regional figure of speech? I'm from the East Coast so I would not be familiar with the specific figures of speech native to certain regions. Otherwise, not a bad chapter. I decided to read a second chapter today.
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Thanks again for the tips. And yeah, tagged back is the same as lagged back here in the central region. I'm glad you checked out the next one, that means I'm doing an okay job at the very least.