The Tantabus merges with an unsuspecting human, who then finds himself in a time before even Sunset Shimmer had become Princess Celestia's student. As well, things are a bit more interdimensionally complicated... What will happen?
You unlocked a Hidden Gift! You now have at least one Loyal Follower who will read this with enthusiasm! And as a Secret Bonus you may now summon The Ranger to aid you if you need help!
the Ranger's me, btw... Imagine an anthropomorphic Thestral wearing a set of this armor but the mask can be detached. Mainly for easier time getting the helmet off or to use the helmet without the mask. The mask is placed on in combat situations mostly or to intimidate someone. The Ranger is armed with an Anti-material rifle using either explosive, armor piercing, FMJ or incendiary rounds. Also a 10 millimeter pistol and an automatic combat rifle. The name you can see already :D oh, also the ranger has a liking to whiskey and salmiac candy
I hope there not to op that be boring without struggle or challenges to overcome for them. like maybe their dream place is not perfect as they thought it was little problems made by them by accident or twilight tell Celestia or her parents i mean the magic is scary and maybe want a nightmare construct punishing children or ponies who annoy them contained and lock away forever or till luna comes to deal with it big nope there. or there another tantabus
I'm intrigued, will read when I get a chance
Hmm... Ye~es, this some great potential.
You unlocked a Hidden Gift! You now have at least one Loyal Follower who will read this with enthusiasm! And as a Secret Bonus you may now summon The Ranger to aid you if you need help!
the Ranger's me, btw... Imagine an anthropomorphic Thestral wearing a set of this armor but the mask can be detached. Mainly for easier time getting the helmet off or to use the helmet without the mask. The mask is placed on in combat situations mostly or to intimidate someone. The Ranger is armed with an Anti-material rifle using either explosive, armor piercing, FMJ or incendiary rounds. Also a 10 millimeter pistol and an automatic combat rifle. The name you can see already :D oh, also the ranger has a liking to whiskey and salmiac candy
Interesting concept, I'm in.
If the OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
I hope there not to op that be boring without struggle or challenges to overcome for them.
like maybe their dream place is not perfect as they thought it was little problems made by them by accident or twilight tell Celestia or her parents i mean the magic is scary and maybe want a nightmare construct punishing children or ponies who annoy them contained and lock away forever or till luna comes to deal with it big nope there. or there another tantabus
Yes, a human turned Tantabus dream(EDIT: Opps, I meant "story"...) I shall watch you with anticipation in my heart...
Awesome...
Good beginning i will follow
He seemed a little too eager to blast those foals to death. Oh well
Nice, i hoped a story with a human turned Tantabus would come
When I first played dead space I was 7 or 8, couldn't sleep without a light on for a month.
And you put a kid in there....did the kid get a therapy?
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Damnit Eclipse, I thought we talked about this. No spoilers, and no deciding who's worth what!
Fuck you, he should have gotten worse!
I made you, Eclipse, I can Unmake you.
... Fine. I'm sorry... that I didn't finish those kids off... OW SON OF A-
Slap!
You're not allowed.
Indistinct grumbling...
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Good to know I'm not the only one that has to deal with this crap.
HEY! I'M STILL MORE POWERFUL THAN YOU!
(Gets a nuke out, making L.M. shrink back in fear...)
That's what I thought, ya little shit.
Story concept is good but the story comes off a bit fast paced.
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I agree. way to fast paced...like 20 times to fast. but its interesting...ill keep reading it but I'm kinda unsure.
Well, that blurred by, escalated quickly, like a two-second drama.
Slow down m8!
Maybe I've seen too many badly paced stories but I'm not seeing the blistering pace the comments are mentioning. Hm.