It does show you're just the editor on this, though to be perfectly fair: there's a lot more typos than in your own stories as well, so keep a sharp eye out for those!
It's always hard to comment on porn quality without seeing it through the lense of personal preferences, still this one resonates quite well with me in spite of a premise that is more OOC and unreal than what you usually write - naturally, as much is within the nature of porn. The fetish is far-off and characters not being OOC would defeat the whole purpose, so I find it surprisingly easy to swallow, even when pushed to such extremes.
Plus, of course, stallions. I think I've mentioned how much I prefer those to futa mares.
7400863 It's nice to hear that you are, like your OC, sadistic, revenge based, and will kill people. Ironically, in real life I'm the type of person that couldn't bring myself to kill someone even in defense of my own life. Reminds me of the time I did research to see how many serial killers had written horror fiction. Ironically, none of them that I could find, though there was one that was a children's book author. Sort of a similar situation I guess.
Seriously, though, if that made you angry, definitely don't read Celestia's Relaxing Vacation. She has murdered most named characters by this point. It's reached the point that Chrysalis is actually the protagonist.
7402042 Not to mention the sheer stupidity of giving out any part of your real name or personal information in a public forum.
Technically I'm not allowed to use someone else's OC without their permission, however, which I found out when I used Fausticorn in Celestia's Relaxing Vacation and was asked to rename her. Granted, it's still rather obvious who she is, and Maverick is probably one of the least creative OC names, so I could easily use it and say it was somepony else.
The problem then is... is that his OC in his avatar? Cause that thing is nasty as all, I don't know if I want to write anything sexy involving that.
7401993 You shouldn't compare autistic people to such horrible things. If you're referring to his inability to distinguish fiction from reality, I think the word you're looking for is schizophrenic, or possibly schizoaffective.
7406958 I'm pretty neutral on the accumulation of downvotes to be honest. Actually I'd rather honest votes from people who have actually read the story, and not just the description, but we all know that isn't going to happen.
7407474 I'm mostly working on getting Celestia's Relaxing Vacation done. The only reason this one gets updates at all is because someone else is doing most of the work. I don't know exactly when they'll have another chapter for me to edit, but I'll get it up quickly when they do.
This, along with Celestia's relaxing vacation are among those best dark fictions on this site. I didn't bother to comment on CRV but since this one turns out even better I have to at least leave my own voice down. Welcome to the realm of drug literature, this is LSD at its finest form.
Dude, the comments be like...
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(If it doesn't show, It's Micheal Jackson eating popcorn.)
Keep up the good work.
I love your stories. People need darkness one and awhile.
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I read the story for the comment from you every chapter.
It makes me giggle.
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Advanced Mode: Try writing a poem for every chapter of Celestia's Relaxing Vacation.
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I just felt a sudden disturbance in the fabric of the universe.....father.....our father Ilos....we hear you.
we laugh and play with them daddy.
we feast upon and love them without the need returned father.
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It does show you're just the editor on this, though to be perfectly fair: there's a lot more typos than in your own stories as well, so keep a sharp eye out for those!
It's always hard to comment on porn quality without seeing it through the lense of personal preferences, still this one resonates quite well with me in spite of a premise that is more OOC and unreal than what you usually write - naturally, as much is within the nature of porn. The fetish is far-off and characters not being OOC would defeat the whole purpose, so I find it surprisingly easy to swallow, even when pushed to such extremes.
Plus, of course, stallions. I think I've mentioned how much I prefer those to futa mares.
This story is wrong on so many levels! This is vore and rape that goes too far! Delete this!!!!!
7400863 It's nice to hear that you are, like your OC, sadistic, revenge based, and will kill people. Ironically, in real life I'm the type of person that couldn't bring myself to kill someone even in defense of my own life.
Reminds me of the time I did research to see how many serial killers had written horror fiction. Ironically, none of them that I could find, though there was one that was a children's book author. Sort of a similar situation I guess.
Seriously, though, if that made you angry, definitely don't read Celestia's Relaxing Vacation. She has murdered most named characters by this point. It's reached the point that Chrysalis is actually the protagonist.
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You should not have said that dude, the writer might add you into the story... Never give out your oc!
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Not to mention the sheer stupidity of giving out any part of your real name or personal information in a public forum.
Technically I'm not allowed to use someone else's OC without their permission, however, which I found out when I used Fausticorn in Celestia's Relaxing Vacation and was asked to rename her. Granted, it's still rather obvious who she is, and Maverick is probably one of the least creative OC names, so I could easily use it and say it was somepony else.
The problem then is... is that his OC in his avatar? Cause that thing is nasty as all, I don't know if I want to write anything sexy involving that.
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You shouldn't compare autistic people to such horrible things.
If you're referring to his inability to distinguish fiction from reality, I think the word you're looking for is schizophrenic, or possibly schizoaffective.
7403056 congrats on another fic everyone loves to hate. enjoy the wonderful downvote you so love the get
7406958 I'm pretty neutral on the accumulation of downvotes to be honest. Actually I'd rather honest votes from people who have actually read the story, and not just the description, but we all know that isn't going to happen.
Do you have an update schedule if so what is it. Plus I want more. Your stories are like laughter, sweet psychotic laughter
7407474 I'm mostly working on getting Celestia's Relaxing Vacation done. The only reason this one gets updates at all is because someone else is doing most of the work. I don't know exactly when they'll have another chapter for me to edit, but I'll get it up quickly when they do.
7401993 People like him are why Auschwitz was built.
This, along with Celestia's relaxing vacation are among those best dark fictions on this site. I didn't bother to comment on CRV but since this one turns out even better I have to at least leave my own voice down. Welcome to the realm of drug literature, this is LSD at its finest form.
Shining Steps On A Lego And Dies
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Come on now, not even I would be that cruel to a character!
Fun fact, Poulain mort means foal death.
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How fancy!