The next morning, Cadence took the group out for breakfast, she wanted the boys to go along with them this time, but Marshall was desperate to make sure they stay at the castle alone. Nopony noticed Shining Armor or Mocha Jon enough to consider anything wrong with either of them. Twilight however was desperate to know what Marshall meant last night. She wanted to talk to him again but she was worried about what he would say. She didn't like any of the things Marshall has told her, they were all out of malice and were extremely uncalled for, but they were taking a tole on her. Was she chosen to be a Princess because she was a girl? Would Celestia love her as much if she was a stallion? It's a shame that she felt this way, because she's even worried about how everypony will feel about Flurry Heart being born into being a Princess and Marshall needing to work so hard. When they left, Marshall was alone with Shining Armor and Mocha Jon in the study, Big Macintosh was sulking in his room.
"You two! I believe it's time we spoke to your friend... He could use some 'cheering up'" He said in a sinister tone with his deep latin accent and started to walk off.
"Yes Master..." They said in unison, their eyes still glowing cyan, as they started following Marshall, to which he retorted with a smug grin.
The stallions entered Big Mac's room and noticed Big Mac was looking at Ginger Snap's picture and was sobbing in a cartoonish fashion (he was sniffling and sucking his hoof like a thumb). He looked over and when he saw them enter, he stopped crying and began to blush in embarrassment. Marshall did chuckle a little but he still remained serious. The others followed obediently and didn't make a sound.
"Hello there Big Macintosh, I shall skip the introduction because, you know, I'm a Prince and all, so I need no explanation," He smugly told the red stallion, "So word on the street is you had a special somepony, am I right?"
"Eeyup."
"And she broke your heart just so she could meet your sister, is this true?" He unsympathetically asked.
Big Mac sighed, "Eeyup."
"That's typical of mares, wouldn't you agree?"
"Eeyup...? Wait... Nope? What?"
"See, girls always want to use us, she didn't care about you, she only wanted to meet your famous sister, another girl, see us stallions must stick together to help stop this pain."
"Eeyup?" Big Mac was confused, what was Marshall talking about? All mares are using him? For a second he looked over at the other two, Jon was just looking blankly forward, and Shining Armor looked like he had a headache as he blinked and put his hoof on his head.
"And the worst one of all... The Princesses! All those girls never gave us a chance, with Cadence and Twilight becoming Alicorns but not Shining Armor, to all the elements of Harmony include the girls but not Spike!" Marshall yelled out more seriously and sternly, he seemed to have more plans.
"Nope?" Big Mac never thought of the Princess as bad, girls or boys, the Princesses were deep in his heart and he was loyal to them deeply.
"How do you feel about rejecting Celestia and joining my new kingdom...?" Marshall asked as he leaned down and revealed his horn.
"NOPE!!!" Big Mac yelled out. He looked furious, he would never dream of leaving Celestia in a million years. Marshall may be a Prince but he has never saved him like Celestia has.
Suddenly Marshall's horn began to glow... "Sin lanzar un ataque, el semental presentarĂ¡..." And just like that Big Mac's eyes turned cyan and Shining Armor put his hoof down.
"Eeyup!" He responded and Marshall chuckled with egotism afterwards.
"Oy, I cannot have a good evil laugh with this attractive accent! All I can do is this chuckle." He complained. "Anyway, to test all of your loyalty, I want you to go out in the hall and the first thing that shows any Princess!"
"Yes Master..." They all said in unison.
"And stop that slow zombie like talking, it's creeping me out, just obey me and talk normal." He retorted, actually having a point, when ponies are hypnotized they can still act normal and not creepy.
"Sorry Master." Shining Armor blushed, sounding normal though still hypnotized.
"We thought it would be funny, I guess not." Jon responded, also sounding normal.
"It's like watching that pink friend of Twilight, it gets old very fast." He answered.
They all walked out and the first thing they was was a six foot high bust of Celestia and Luna. Without warning, they all just got angry looks in their eyes and all at once turned around to kick it. Shining Armor and Big Mac kicked again almost instantly, but Jon sat on the floor for a moment and was panting out in pain from that one kick he did... He looked really pathetic and was about to cry, he even rubbed his eyes with his neck-chief... He managed to shake it off when Celestia's head broke off the bust and he stomped on the horn breaking it off.
"Man her horn's still bigger than mine!" He complained, his horn is incredibly tiny and he hates that...
As the three destroyed the sculpture, Marshall walked over and congratulated them, "Very nice boys, it's great to finally see somepony stand up against those two."
"Eeyup." Big Mac responded.
"Now sense I have you all under my spell, I can tell you my plan without it backfiring like some stupid villain in a story," He sarcastically stated (then they all looked at the camera and winked), "Anyway, I want to start a rebellion, those mares have ruled over us stallions long enough! When I have every stallion in Equestria under my power, I will over throw them all, Equestria will change and become run by us men instead of those women!"
They all nodded in response, "No offense Master, but between the three of us, only Shining Armor has enough magic to even make a blast, we aren't the best army." Jon snarked.
"Well speaking of which, Shining Armor's wife is who I need, there's a reason I've been flirting with her so much, I knew Shining Armor would allow the Princess of Love to give me that, but I care not about her, I just need her magic, Shining Armor... I command you to end your marriage with Cadence! I shall take care of it from there."
"Yes Master, I don't want to loose her, but if you command it, I must obey..."Shining Armor responded, he didn't want to do that at all. He may be hypnotized but he was still Shining Armor, but he was going to do it...
"And you Jon, you're close friends with Twilight, the Princess of Friendship, if one of her friends tells off her and her friends and stops being her friend, then she will be too emotionally crushed to stop me and..." Marshall began to explain.
"Say no more, that book worm and those girls who have nothing in common will hear everything bad they need, so don't get your ponytail in a bunch!" he snarked at him, he may be hypnotized too but he was still Jon and Jon is snarky, and to be honest Marshall likes the idea of having a sarcastic slave.
"What about me Master?" Big Mac asked.
"I need somepony to entertain me while they do that, Big Mac, roll over, sit, lie down." Marshall commanded. Big Mac obeyed these commands as if he was a dog, in a very cartoonish and comedic way. "Plus I need somepony to give that badger Jon has a bath... It does not smell clean."
"He's a badger! Sue him!" Jon yelled, he never really thought the badge smelt bad because his nose is weak.
The two hypnotized stallions walked out of the castle eager to ruin some lives. Marshall was levitating a red ball around the room with Big Macintosh and Jon's badger racing against each other to fetch it as Marshall chuckled to himself.
Interesting story so far. Definitely not a great story, but I enjoy seeing this Prince Marshal's rants about mare being unfair with stallions, and make an ass of himself. He has deep routed unresolved issues with mares, which I suppose that he was always rejected by mares because of his bad looks and his resenting attitude toward them, for which he shifts the blame on them instead on reflecting about himself. Because of that, he warps his reality of everything he see around him as to fit his obsessions against mare. Seeing the other story he is quite possibly be a closet case of repress homosexuality, or that he feels just feel inadequate compared to any other stallions around him and that the pet fetish pet play of homomorphic scene is just a way for him to make him feel better about himself, by not feeing threaten by them because of his low self-esteem. coupled with his apparent accession of becoming an alicorn prince, he is indulging himself in every power trip that his little troll mind can come up with couple which his mind control powers will make sure that he get everything he wants from it and I am sure that he will make lots stupid decisions in order to get what he wants. I am looking forward to see what's the next plan in his little skim.
7278337 Hello Mrs. Torres, AP Literature ended two weeks ago! (a joke)
For the most part you're on par fairly well with Marshall. Though like I said, this story influences the other story but that story is i dependent of this one. As far as I'm concerned for this story, Marshall is asexual, and he's actually considered very attractive (one of the reasons I imagine his VA as Enrique Iglesias.) Though most people just 'assume' he's unattractive because he's half donkey. I'm glad to know you thought so much about him and want to know more, don't worry, when I explain his backstory he will finally reveal why he hates males.
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Well I like character with deep routed flaws they are more likely to do things that other sane people would not normally do.
I thought he hated mares not stallions?
If he is half Donkey then that means he is a "mule"
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1) Thanks!
2) Typo sorry...
3) A mule is a hybrid of a male donkey and a female horse, a hinny is a hybrid of a male horse and a female donkey.
7278452 Sorry, my mistake I forgot about that.
7278456 I wanted to have a hybrid so it would be a metaphor for Marshall being half hispanic. Also, hinnies if you ask me, are very very cute. So everyone thinks they would be ugly like mules but they all find him very attractive as a surprise. Plus I wanted to finally have a good hinny on MLP, the only time they ever referenced them was once and I'm pretty sure she was an actor
7278466 I think it's more about the coverart that lead me to believe he was ugly as he seems to be rather forgettable with his colors and seem to be rather on edge with his eyes and the lines on his legs seemed to make me think it was wrinkles which add to the image of being much older then he might be.
7278481 I didn't draw him, somepony from Bronysquare drew him for me. He's actually older than Cadence but sense he's a hinny (they're very small) he looks as old as Twilight
I'll bet that he''l brainwash Spike next.
7290471 I'll have part 5 up tomorrow, trust me later in LOTS more will be brainwashed too.
What, no "We don't need no steenking badgers" joke?