Not bad so far. Like and a fave for you.

1 word comes to mind for this chapter

epic

While I did like the first version, those last few chapters were getting freaking WEIRD!
Only one chapter of this new rendition and all I can say is so far so Epic

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7207819 I'll do my job if you remember to do yours.

Good beginning though. I love the Dragon even more.

i love it

Oh shit, epic first chapter.

I love it so far. And I'm more than willing to be a proofreader for you.

7207805 when can we expect next chapter?

Is this a crossover? It sounds like a crossover of Skyrim.

This only the first chapter and I already tell that this going to be AWESOME with a Capital everything.

Great start, can't wait to see where you go with this!

7208039 It has a little Skyrim in it but it's not a crossover.

Dragon God 2.0, it's only 1 chapter in already better

7207958 I have to ask, is your profile pic Nicholas Cage as Yoda?

.....That is one of the most randomly horrifying thoughts I've ever had, AND I HAVE SEEN SOME SHIT!!!

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7208324 I know right. Like I said in my blog the first had
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7207847 Thanks man, appreciate it.

7208677 WTF is that Pic?

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7208651 Yes, it's Nicholas Cage as Yoda.

Looks good. A decent improvement over the old version; I look forward to seeing what you have planned.

Also, the dragon's name: is it in Dovahzul?

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7209492 its a name I got from a Dovah name generator.

7209587: Thought as much.

7209598 Meh, its a cool and Dovazul like name.

Someones in for a spanking.

7209780 Imma pretend that it what I means think it means.

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDGE!!!!!!!
i think this is better than dragon god of equestria!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait for more dude!
woot!

I like it so far, though i think instead of actually POSTING the images of certain character, you should link the image of said character in the worlds, like this while still descripting the character. Dont put too many links though, as too many links directs the viewers attention far too often, which is quite annoying.

You have my interest.

The mental image of that badass dragon with his arm crossed staring at Celestial and Luna with a disapproving frown is way too funny for some strange reason. Can't wait for chapter two!!!!!!

i like it

I am willing to be the proofreader. Just send me the links to the Google docs

Don't stop keep going.

Okay I have to say this but, don't use pictures to describe your characters, It makes you seem really lazy

A small nit-pick to an otherwise grand story: you said, "he revealed six bubble containing her friends and the traitor." when the canon had 7 bubbles, and you even eluded to Spike being there, making the count 7 again

A lot of grammar mistakes but a truly interesting idea.

I'm liking the story and will read more but I suggest you get an editor hell I'll do it for you

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THATS WHAT SHE SAID!

*sigh* ...yeah, I know. I'm cancerous.

The grammar is not the best but the main protag 100% is.