Xavier Young is a writer and protector of Fables. He soon discovers a package from his lost mother. Now with this package and his friend, Flame, they set out on a journey to discover the truth. But this journey will be one they make in a new world.
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I see today's delivery of cringe has arrived.
More please !!!
You really need an editor. I mean, if you want, I could probably try.
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Thanks, I would like that till I get another editor to make sure it is edited.
7241401 cool. I'll start working on it tomorrow.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Thanks
Done fall? I think you meant down fall.
Also, it says "I told them about who my family history."
"I haven't spared with anyone in a while" i think you mean sparred.
Really need to double check your writing before you upload.
Also he is busy looking for his mom why is he taking a disciple to teach his martial arts to and listening to music, he has things going on in his life or did he just forget that?
Light manipulation? And where did the sword come from i dont think i skipped any parts maybe i did
A concussion is brain damage.
I see so we going turning spike a girl route kool
So far so good, aside from a few glaring grammatical errors.
What was last music use for battle on manticore