Xavier Young is a writer and protector of Fables. He soon discovers a package from his lost mother. Now with this package and his friend, Flame, they set out on a journey to discover the truth. But this journey will be one they make in a new world.
Page generated in 0.023 seconds
Total duration
1,009 users online
1,680,282 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Meant to bring this up a couple chapters ago but you constantly misspelled the word bet you use beat like "I beat a drum" just thought I'd point that out, love the story by the way
Applejack had some crusading to do? Funny I thought Applebloom was the crusader.
He is only now finding the crystal heart when he has had long enough to research it or ask twilight about it? Hell, it is on almost everything his mom gave him like the coat and belt he has.
What? Did twilight not see those ever? Not once does she say "hey, that design on your coat looks an awful lot like the crystal heart in the crystal empire, which my brother and sister-in-law are currently ruling. Just thought you should know that."
"Yes, my kids are the twelve Crystal Shard Dragons. Each of my wings represents the elemental property. They are fire, ice, water, light, earth, electricity, life, wind, darkness, tech, steel, and psychic."
1. Change electricity to thunder or lighting
2.Tech? This is not an elemental property whatsoever.
This story is getting better and better!