Xavier Young is a writer and protector of Fables. He soon discovers a package from his lost mother. Now with this package and his friend, Flame, they set out on a journey to discover the truth. But this journey will be one they make in a new world.
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... ... ... .... ... ... ... ... bru... ... ... ... why? Why do u do dis? Don't threat a story like a cartoon or alike. Never put an opening or an ending like THIS. This is not an anime! Heck, every damn opening if it was put in words would suck bru! The story so far is nice, yet this one chapter made everything feel wrong ._. Why put paragraph within (-)? Hope next chapter doesn't bring my mood down :S
P.S. This isn't even part of the story, this actually have nothing to do with the story. It is worse than Naruto fillers... if you aren't gonna make a chapter about something that HAPPENS in the story, then put it in your blog and not here :S
P.S.S. Look, when people read a new chapter they don't go back to the 'opening' as you put it. Would you go back and think about this every time you read a chapter? No you won't. That only happen on animes, and cartoons. Something that last for 24 mins. If you try to put a chapter of a anime in words it would become a 30k words worth chapter. Not 2k.
P.S.S.S.... .... .... Why does this make me mad anyway? Meh.
I agree OP's are for animes and cartoons, which I skip unless the music is catchy as hell, not fanfictions. Now if you were/are gonna make an animation then it would work but this is something that readers just skip over, therefore you do not need it.
Even when equestrian human spirit did it i would mentally groan then scroll all the way to where the chapter really started.
Its just really unnecessary.
This was a good opening. I was able to actually see everything happen as if I was watching tv. Great job.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
You're writing a story, not an anime. Dingus.
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He writes whatever he wants to write no?
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if you don't like his style why are you here ... no really if you have that big a problem with it I don't see why you guys even started reading this? anywho. Nice work here I liked it keep up the good work :D
Yikes...... yeah that's some definite cringe right there. The story is definitely interesting for sure, and I'll keep reading, but this..... this ain't it chief.