Twilight and Cadance
Twilight tried her very best not to spew cucumber and spinach sandwich all over the table. “Wait, no, and then we’d do what with our what?!”
Cadence smirked across at Twilight. “We can work our way up to that.” She winked and returned to her own lunch.
Twilight blushed and wiped her mouth with her hoof. She smiled at the beautiful mare sitting with her. She wasn’t entirely sure how they got here. It was their sixth date, not counting official events and the random few nights at Twilight’s spent reading together until they fell asleep curled up next to each other.
“Yeah, we’d have to practice a lot to get up to that-.” Twilight facehoofed at her inadvertently dirty mind.
Cadence reached over and laid her hoof against Twilight’s. “Twi, I’m so glad you feel the same way about me that I do about you.”
Twilight worked her mouth and pursed her lips awkwardly. She was still getting used to the idea of being an item with Cadence. They were foalhood friends. And this was a big step.
“What’s wrong, Twi?”
“Oh nothing. I’ve always got 90 different scenarios playing out in my head. I don’t want to lose our friendship…” She blushed again as Cadance placed her hoof over her mouth. Cadence looked at her with her big purple eyes and Twilight turned to mush. She grinned like an idiot.
Apart from a need to brush my teeth, very good.
Very cute. I love Twidance and Twilestia, so it's always great to have more of it. I do hope you keep practicing!
Having said that, it very much seems like this is practice. It's nothing jarring enough to throw me out of the experience, but... If you'd like, I can point out some things I noticed either in a comment or a PM. Or not at all. It's up to you. Practice makes perfect, but guided practice helps get you there faster.
Regardless, keep it up!
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Thank you, JKinsley! I would very much appreciate it if you would PM me some things. I'll admit I'm not a practiced creative writer but willing to try. :)
I'm waiting for chapter 2 to comment! I really like that you're getting into creative writing more, Bubble. I adore these little scenes and snippets, I really do. So I'm waiting to see what you come out with and surprise me.
Plus, it's basically no fair that you are starting off with my fave princess ships!
Stop trying to kill me with cuteness!
Ah crap, I seem to have caught the diabeetus.
Great job Bubble!