7204567 ah ok. That's kind of what I was going for. I was trying to capture that vibe Celestia gives off some times, where she's nice and calm, but you know if she needed to she could rain down some wrath. Some crazy 5,000 year old snake thingy just bit her girlfriend so I thought it would be a cool moment if Twilight sort of snapped and went into fearsome god mode to protect Fluttershy.
7205704 I disagree, I perfectly see Twilight as capable of being violent and destructive if something she values is on the line. We have seen she can really overreact at times and she has used her magic for combat multiple times.
This chapter was not as good as the previous one. Twilight felt very out of character in her sudden decision to freak out. Then you just added some random creature which can cast magic, is venomous, and apparently has been hibernating for 5000 years. Yay for convenient plot devices! As it is, this still is fairly good quality and I do sense that there will be some good plotlines coming in soon. I am sad that I am so close to being caught up with the story.
... That was unexpected.
What the heck just happened?
That seemed a little OOC for twilight.
7202726 OOC is a new one for me you're going to have to spell that one out for me.
7202945 Out of character
7204567 ah ok. That's kind of what I was going for. I was trying to capture that vibe Celestia gives off some times, where she's nice and calm, but you know if she needed to she could rain down some wrath. Some crazy 5,000 year old snake thingy just bit her girlfriend so I thought it would be a cool moment if Twilight sort of snapped and went into fearsome god mode to protect Fluttershy.
7204843 Yes, I get that's what you was going for, but it seemed too over the top. Cracking it's shell and whatnot. Like she was trying to kill it.
7205704
I disagree, I perfectly see Twilight as capable of being violent and destructive if something she values is on the line. We have seen she can really overreact at times and she has used her magic for combat multiple times.
This chapter was not as good as the previous one. Twilight felt very out of character in her sudden decision to freak out. Then you just added some random creature which can cast magic, is venomous, and apparently has been hibernating for 5000 years. Yay for convenient plot devices! As it is, this still is fairly good quality and I do sense that there will be some good plotlines coming in soon. I am sad that I am so close to being caught up with the story.