7280672 Somebody correct me if I'm wrong but I believe the weird insect race is somewhat influenced by the Mass Effect race of the same name. I agree they feel a little out of place, but I've seen a LOT worse plot devices in fics on here, so I can dig it :)
7281769 yeah I borrowed the name from Mass Effect. Though technically my version is pronounced rack-nee not rack-ni, but it's not like anyone can tell.
7298455 you have no idea how much the ever free spelling mistake drives me insane. it's one of those things microsoft word auto corrects. If I wasn't lazy I'd add Everfree to word's dictionary but well I'm lazy.
This... I'm honestly losing interest. I will keep reading to see what happens, but honestly? This seems like a huge step in some random direction. I feel like this story has taken a step away from AB/DL and into some alternative plot that is not what I came here for. I feel like this new plot device truly belongs elsewhere. I came to this series to read some light fluff about AB/DL and was happy to find actual story in it explaining how it came to be. I expected the sequel to continue with the story and add some more dark magic testing. I admit, this chapter fulfilled that idea, but it did it in such a weird way... It feels like you are shoving two completely opposite plots down our throats. I will stop talking here because I am realising that I am becoming aggressive. I apologise, I am not trying to be aggressive.
I feel like your weird insect race should probably be its own fic. It seems out of place here.
7280672 Somebody correct me if I'm wrong but I believe the weird insect race is somewhat influenced by the Mass Effect race of the same name.
I agree they feel a little out of place, but I've seen a LOT worse plot devices in fics on here, so I can dig it :)
7281769 yeah I borrowed the name from Mass Effect. Though technically my version is pronounced rack-nee not rack-ni, but it's not like anyone can tell.
7298455 you have no idea how much the ever free spelling mistake drives me insane. it's one of those things microsoft word auto corrects. If I wasn't lazy I'd add Everfree to word's dictionary but well I'm lazy.
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Oh, okay.
As for my take on this chapter: ...
This... I'm honestly losing interest. I will keep reading to see what happens, but honestly? This seems like a huge step in some random direction. I feel like this story has taken a step away from AB/DL and into some alternative plot that is not what I came here for. I feel like this new plot device truly belongs elsewhere. I came to this series to read some light fluff about AB/DL and was happy to find actual story in it explaining how it came to be. I expected the sequel to continue with the story and add some more dark magic testing. I admit, this chapter fulfilled that idea, but it did it in such a weird way... It feels like you are shoving two completely opposite plots down our throats. I will stop talking here because I am realising that I am becoming aggressive. I apologise, I am not trying to be aggressive.