I'm not so sure about this. I would think Twilight wouldn't allow herself to do this until she's got Fluttershy restored. Maybe they coud do this after Fluttershy is restored but for now Twilight should be Fluttershy's mom. This is kind of an admission of failure on Twilight's part.
“You are going to wait there patiently!” Rarity said threateningly
you should replace threateningly with firmly.
“I can’t,” Fluttershy said giggling, “You’re too cute I can’t help myself.”
that doesn't sound like something a foal would do. That is more like something an adult foal would. Also Fluttershy after that seems like an adult, she should be like an actual foal and do a lot of crying and whining.
Twilight entered her lab. She immediately removed her onesie
I think Twilight would need a minute to shift her mindset from foalish to scientific again.
Also why do they have anti-venom? I would think it wouldn't exist and Twilight would have to make it herself.
Fluttershy seems to regain her adult mind for only a few minutes after waking up, hence the brief "adult" foal portion. This is never really explained, just assumed to be a side-effect of Twilight's spell. It also occurs in an earlier chapter.
7391097 I think I've mentioned briefly that the spell wears off a bit after sleep in this one, it was also a thing in the previous messing with magic. And Twilight wasn't expecting the samples to be ready when she went in she just wanted to check on their progress she didn't think she would need to go into full scientist mode. And it made sense to me that the Raccni would have an anti venom and know how to make more of it just in case they ever need it.
7392417 it's a case of better to have it and not need than to need it and not have it. There's a bunch of situations where having an anti venom would be useful, especially for them because they like to cover their tracks. Like if something reacts unexpectedly to the venom and they happen to not be guarded by an alicorn princess they would sneak in and deliver the anti venom just to make sure there wasn't any trace of them left. Or what if one of them accidentally bit another and they started having a minor reaction, the problem is immediately solved if they have an anti venom. I'm sure as incompetent as they are they've found a reason to use it.
7393847 It sounds somewhat far-fetched. I think they wouldn't really care. In fact going again the use the anti-venom is even more dangerous as the sudden recovery would make the ponies more suspicious. Not to mention they'll have to expose themselves a second time.
I'm not so sure about this. I would think Twilight wouldn't allow herself to do this until she's got Fluttershy restored. Maybe they coud do this after Fluttershy is restored but for now Twilight should be Fluttershy's mom. This is kind of an admission of failure on Twilight's part.
you should replace threateningly with firmly.
that doesn't sound like something a foal would do. That is more like something an adult foal would. Also Fluttershy after that seems like an adult, she should be like an actual foal and do a lot of crying and whining.
I think Twilight would need a minute to shift her mindset from foalish to scientific again.
Also why do they have anti-venom? I would think it wouldn't exist and Twilight would have to make it herself.
Loving the cute stuff, especially when Twilight "misbehaves". Keep it up!![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
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Fluttershy seems to regain her adult mind for only a few minutes after waking up, hence the brief "adult" foal portion. This is never really explained, just assumed to be a side-effect of Twilight's spell. It also occurs in an earlier chapter.
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but wouldn't Twilight notice it?
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misbehaves? Where does that happen?
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Since it happened once before Twilight not being surprised is normal.
And misbehaving in the sense of being grumpy, or rude to her caretaker, whether on purpose or not, the ensuing punishments are always fun :)
This chapter was pretty good. I look forward to the next chapter.
7391097 I think I've mentioned briefly that the spell wears off a bit after sleep in this one, it was also a thing in the previous messing with magic. And Twilight wasn't expecting the samples to be ready when she went in she just wanted to check on their progress she didn't think she would need to go into full scientist mode. And it made sense to me that the Raccni would have an anti venom and know how to make more of it just in case they ever need it.
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Twilight was in full foal mode so she has to at least switch to neutral mode.
Why do they have anti-venom? I would figure they are immune to their own toxins and I don't think they really care about the faith of their victims.
7392417 it's a case of better to have it and not need than to need it and not have it. There's a bunch of situations where having an anti venom would be useful, especially for them because they like to cover their tracks. Like if something reacts unexpectedly to the venom and they happen to not be guarded by an alicorn princess they would sneak in and deliver the anti venom just to make sure there wasn't any trace of them left. Or what if one of them accidentally bit another and they started having a minor reaction, the problem is immediately solved if they have an anti venom. I'm sure as incompetent as they are they've found a reason to use it.
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It sounds somewhat far-fetched. I think they wouldn't really care. In fact going again the use the anti-venom is even more dangerous as the sudden recovery would make the ponies more suspicious. Not to mention they'll have to expose themselves a second time.