So far off to an excellent start! No obvious errors in spelling or grammar (or maybe I was too engrossed to care). If I am correct, this takes place a year after the last one, which does upset me. I've never liked time skips greater than one week. But, I suppose I will have to put up with it. Anyway, I will torture myself further today by waiting until tomorrow to really get into it. God damn... I have had a rough day with torture...
And now for my play by play of this one!
So far off to an excellent start! No obvious errors in spelling or grammar (or maybe I was too engrossed to care). If I am correct, this takes place a year after the last one, which does upset me. I've never liked time skips greater than one week. But, I suppose I will have to put up with it. Anyway, I will torture myself further today by waiting until tomorrow to really get into it. God damn... I have had a rough day with torture...