Twilight Sparkle comes to realize that her interest in mind-altering magic might not be entirely innocent. But now that she is aware of her kink... what does she do about it?
It's kind of a difference to see the mind control story start out with Twilight not mind-controlling someone first. :) I do like how you've tied it to her history... I'm interested in seeing what's next.
I'm actually happy that Twilight understands that non-consenual hypnosis is very morally wrong. It's also very refreshing to see something where the whole thing is explained.
I was almost expecting Cadance's decision to reveal some of her friends' fetishes to be because Twilight had just subtly used mind control on her. Wouldn't be in-character, but that would have been a pretty epic twist. :P
6885109 and I think it also describes really well how most people with a hypnofetish feel about it. I can tell that this wont be just another every-day hypno clop fic^^ Me gusta mucho
Also... I really do like the idea ofRarity being a switch.
Twilight paused. “Huh. You know, there was this thing in the human dimension called the World Wide Web… It’s a lot less* sinister than it sounds… Sorry, I’m getting off-topic.”
*Did you mean to say "more"? Because World Wide Web doesn't really strike me as sinister.
>>Wintermist Coming from you, that's encouraging. I doubt I can match the awesomeness of your Friendship Is Mind Control, but it's the story that inspired me to write this.
>>duke86fan I'll try to be quick about updating... But, between "Where I Watch: My Little Pony", my "Worm" fanfics, and "Saga of Soul", I'm juggling a lot of projects.
>>Artemis Fowl II Imagine a giant spiderweb that covers the entire planet. Sounds sinister enough yet?
Consider me intrigued with this story. I'm looking forward to more.
Also, at the start of the chapter, you wrote that Cadance was Twilight's 'step-sister', when she's actually Twilight's sister-in-law. A step-sister would be someone who is the daughter of someone your parent (mother or father) remarried after separating from your other parent.
Rainbow Dash likes being a sub (no surprise there), Fluttershy wants to be a dom (but is too shy to even fantasize about it) and Rarity can be either/or (depending on the pony). I want what Applejack's and Pinkie Pie's fetishes are?
6899022 (These are just my ideas) Maybe Applejack has a bondage fetish and wants to be coiled up by a snake/Lamia while hypnotized, so Twilight transforms into one. I know, some might not like the concept, but it's an idea. :P
6899022 It's not written in stone, but for the sake of this story, I picture Applejack as "purely vanilla, not interested in the weird stuff", and Pinkie Pie as "I'll try anything once!".
Damned nice to see the characters in-character and not doing a 'Clockwork Orange' here. ;) Also, Shining Armor and Cadance there, too damned funny. :D Excellent work!
“Oh, sorry. It means, someone who can be dominant or submissive, depending on the context. I think she enjoys acting dominant toward those she considers her social inferiors, and wants to submit to those she considers her social superiors.”
That last one seems kinda OOC for Rarity, makes her seem classist.
Twilight paused. “She didn’t seem very submissive with Prince Bluebl- no, I suppose bad graces would turn Rarity off no matter what. Er, how would she feel dating an equal, then?”
Actually, I think she was quite ready to take the submissive part—what she didn't want to put up with was not being appreciated. In that sense, if Blueblood ever showed up and put in some effort into sweeping her off her hooves, she would totally let herself be swept. She'd probably jump at it.
7592460 Kind of but only if you take it at it's most literal. There are tons of people who think that the people around them are in different rungs on a ladder while also seeing that they are all people just as well. It's hard to describe, but think of it as a mostly subconscious opinion.
“You are not some kind of pervert. Like I said, fetishes are extremely common. Yours is not even remotely the weirdest I’ve encountered… and believe me, there are fetishes centered around much worse things.” “...I have trouble imagining,” Twilight admitted. “Don’t even try,” Cadence shuddered.
Beware the internet Twilight, beware!
Twilight paused. “Huh. You know, there was this thing in the human dimension called the World Wide Web… It’s a lot less sinister than it sounds…
Hmm ... A "Twilight is into mind control" based around the actual show, and not as evil MC but fetish/more realistic MC? With even reasonable description of hypnosis?
Sound like ... only one more chapter and then it ends?@?!?
It's kind of a difference to see the mind control story start out with Twilight not mind-controlling someone first. :) I do like how you've tied it to her history... I'm interested in seeing what's next.
This is actually a really nice description of Mind Control Fetish in general.
You have my attention.
This looks really promising.
I'm actually happy that Twilight understands that non-consenual hypnosis is very morally wrong. It's also very refreshing to see something where the whole thing is explained.
at first you had my curiosity, sir. But now you have my attention.
Okay, yes, I want to see more of this.
I am starting to wonder if there even is a dom!Rainbow fiction out there, or if it is a strange exception to Rule 34.
6884183 oh...there is..in fact, one got featured not even a week ago
6884278 which one is that?
6884336 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/309621/the-perils-of-pornographic-paperwork
I like where this is going...
*pulls up a bed and hides in the covers* I now watch this VERY intently!
Please continue this. This is actually a very nice idea and for somebody like me, who has a big hypnofetish, this presses all the right buttons.
I shall keep my eye on you.
I was almost expecting Cadance's decision to reveal some of her friends' fetishes to be because Twilight had just subtly used mind control on her. Wouldn't be in-character, but that would have been a pretty epic twist. :P
6885109 and I think it also describes really well how most people with a hypnofetish feel about it. I can tell that this wont be just another every-day hypno clop fic^^ Me gusta mucho
Also... I really do like the idea ofRarity being a switch.
*Did you mean to say "more"? Because World Wide Web doesn't really strike me as sinister.
>>Wintermist Coming from you, that's encouraging. I doubt I can match the awesomeness of your Friendship Is Mind Control, but it's the story that inspired me to write this.
>>duke86fan I'll try to be quick about updating... But, between "Where I Watch: My Little Pony", my "Worm" fanfics, and "Saga of Soul", I'm juggling a lot of projects.
>>Artemis Fowl II Imagine a giant spiderweb that covers the entire planet. Sounds sinister enough yet?
Consider me intrigued with this story. I'm looking forward to more.
Also, at the start of the chapter, you wrote that Cadance was Twilight's 'step-sister', when she's actually Twilight's sister-in-law. A step-sister would be someone who is the daughter of someone your parent (mother or father) remarried after separating from your other parent.
6888405 Whoops. Fixed. Thanks!
Hey, Twilight can moonlight on the side of her Princessly duties by running a fetish matchmaking service in the name of 'spreading friendship'!
Rainbow Dash likes being a sub (no surprise there), Fluttershy wants to be a dom (but is too shy to even fantasize about it) and Rarity can be either/or (depending on the pony). I want what Applejack's and Pinkie Pie's fetishes are?
You're doing a pretty solid job with this one, my cultured author
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(These are just my ideas) Maybe Applejack has a bondage fetish and wants to be coiled up by a snake/Lamia while hypnotized, so Twilight transforms into one. I know, some might not like the concept, but it's an idea. :P
6899022 It's not written in stone, but for the sake of this story, I picture Applejack as "purely vanilla, not interested in the weird stuff", and Pinkie Pie as "I'll try anything once!".
6899493 I can see that. makes sense.
Damned nice to see the characters in-character and not doing a 'Clockwork Orange' here. ;) Also, Shining Armor and Cadance there, too damned funny. :D Excellent work!
“Oh, sorry. It means, someone who can be dominant or submissive, depending on the context. I think she enjoys acting dominant toward those she considers her social inferiors, and wants to submit to those she considers her social superiors.”
That last one seems kinda OOC for Rarity, makes her seem classist.
Actually, I think she was quite ready to take the submissive part—what she didn't want to put up with was not being appreciated. In that sense, if Blueblood ever showed up and put in some effort into sweeping her off her hooves, she would totally let herself be swept. She'd probably jump at it.
7592460 Kind of but only if you take it at it's most literal. There are tons of people who think that the people around them are in different rungs on a ladder while also seeing that they are all people just as well. It's hard to describe, but think of it as a mostly subconscious opinion.
Beware the internet Twilight, beware!
No, it isn't.
Hmm ... A "Twilight is into mind control" based around the actual show, and not as evil MC but fetish/more realistic MC? With even reasonable description of hypnosis?
Sound like ... only one more chapter and then it ends?@?!?