This is a first person, human in Equestria story about a young man named Travis who ends up in Equestria after taking part in a ritual he didn't wholly believe. He has to learn how to live in Equestria and deal with feelings he develops for a mare.
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7129240 Thanks for the encouraging words. And what do you mean by giving up his humanity? Would you mean by turning into a pony or some other creature? If that's the case, don't worry, he'll stay human. He just doesn't really like other humans very much.
7129927 oh, I rather like transformation stories...
Here I am staring at the ceiling and thinking "did I just really went trough the nine chapters of this awesome story?" Yep, I just did it and now the wait for the next update has started, keep the good job my friend.
7166719 Thanks, it's awesome to know that you got absorbed into reading it.
I agree, but I never was really interessted in hearing other talking about their sexlife, I mean why should I?
I like the pacing of this story, and I would be interessted in them schocking Twilight and Rarity in a way with their relationship.
7179110 Thanks for all the comments and feedback. I understand that Travis is kind of odd, but I think that's just how he is. Keep in mind that he never got along with many people on Earth, this would have been due to his weirdness.
7179163 yes that's alright, I know that myself, at leat part of what he is going trough, I had two or three years like that too, there were just two or three moments, where he was a bit to emotional to my liking,. Like if he would meet a noble that is mean to him, and he would run right away to Celestia or Luna, crying his eyes out and maybe wanting to his mother.
I don't want to sound mean, I just wanted to let you know that I got that feeling at least twice, but beside that I pretty much like him.
7179203 He is emotional, but I don't think he'll cry about a mean noble. Crying after the whole discord thing was partially to do with feeling fearful for his own life. I mean, how would you feel if some being that is essentially a god threatens you?
7180740 I'm not sure right now, but did he even know that much about him when he treaten him for fun? I just feel like I'm that kind of guy, that would only react if actually something happened. However I can't deny that I woud probably be very suprised at least by how he looks like.
Well it is probably as nice to read as it is because of his .....weaker personality.
Sono amazing please continue