This is a first person, human in Equestria story about a young man named Travis who ends up in Equestria after taking part in a ritual he didn't wholly believe. He has to learn how to live in Equestria and deal with feelings he develops for a mare.
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Like I said I'm more against the possible motication he has for joining the military instead of actually doing it or not. I either want them to make clear that they aren't doing it for those idiots or something like that, then finding his own reason to do it.
I just want that the nobles maybe notice they don't do it for them.
8924755 When his decision is announced, it will be made to seem like he’s just doing it for the good of the kingdom as a whole by his own choice. That’s what will impress the nobles and general people; that they think he came up with it himself and not to satisfy anybody else.
Edit: After re-reading this comment of mine, I realise that I haven't quite addressed the main part of your comment. Anyway, if it was just to please the nobles, then Travis wouldn't decide to go. As he said in this chapter, he also wants to fight for Equestria, and more importantly, for Luna.
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I support this idea, you can really do some interesting things with military training. Hell we could meet some new characters and have Travis learn more about himself along the way while he is training. I have a few scenarios in mind already.
8925936 Yeah, that's kind of the plan.