This is a first person, human in Equestria story about a young man named Travis who ends up in Equestria after taking part in a ritual he didn't wholly believe. He has to learn how to live in Equestria and deal with feelings he develops for a mare.
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I may have some information that may or may not be of interest to you dear author. Given that our protagonist is dealing with issues of royal nature, and that the rulers are trying to find solution to integrate him to their lives in any meaningfull way, I propose the following. Equerry, title that is connected to royal families, given to individuals of personal merits. It would be funny if such title would, or had been part of Equestria. It is also a horse pun, all things must be puns.
6921689 Very interesting, I just searched it up and it fits perfectly. I think that I'll have to implement it soon. Thank you very much for letting me know about that
Jolly good story sir
Loving it your doing great
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Thanks for the encouraging words, this is my first time actually writing my own fic.
I'm loving it so far, I can't wait to read more from you!
6940265 Thanks, I'm glad that you are
didn't he said he needed clothes?
Well while I may could say one or two things about the Human here, it is one of those which I can pretty easily like, but I guess with him telling her not to understand him wrong, I can only see either Luna asking him for a date, or some akward situation where a child or something like that is asking if their are together while they are already pretty close friends.
I have to say somehow Luna looks like she would try to stay as royal as possible, then again she would act either like a mother or a filly that has her first friends over for a sleepover and on another hand, she was pretty demanding, as if she was getting upset that her first friend wouldn't be like she imaged him to be. (I mean the scene in her bedroom.)
I just hope that this isn't a story where they aren't allowed to really have a live, just because someone else in the castle is against it. I mean there are storys where either Celestia or Luna can't do anything else, or have to be always happy towards mean nobles, even if there should be an extrem situation. I mean that wouldn't even change if they would have the command about everything, and with that I mean a universe without a tribunal, some sort of noble group that has a huge amount of controle about some things inside of the castle and the laws.
Please don't think I wouldn't understand the importance of their duties, and that it isn't always that easy, but I don't want to make it that complicated right now, I only don't see why they shouldn't be able to just do certain things once in a while or in certain storys.
but first let me take a selfie
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