During the war between Equestria and the Crystal Empire, the mane six get captured. Horrors await, as each of them is 'personally' interrogated by King Sombra.
Before reading this chapter, I thought it was going to be about Sombra raping his next victim. For some odd reason, this threw me completely off guard. I'm not saying that this is a bad thing or disappointed that this is not the case. In fact, I think it was a rather smart move. Not only it was a break from that sex stuff, but we get to see as to what is going on with not just the three that were raped, but the others as well. I can't wait to see what you're going to do next, especially with Pinkie. Truth be told, she's not my most favorite character, but I'm curious as to how she is going to deal with Sombra. I mean, would she willingly have sex with him, and tell him that she doesn't know where the crystal heart is, but the sex was fun anyway, or her mane just turns flat and sobs uncontrollably while he rapes her. Again, keep up the good work, and one last thing.
Still famished, she proceeded to consume the hey, which was somehow even more disgusting. "Pee-yew … I hope the salad is a bit better!" exclaimed the mare, as she tried one of the leaves on the plate.
Why are you spelling it like you are trying to say hey to somebody? It's supposed to be hay as in H-A-Y, not H-E-Y. You not only did it on this sentence but, several others as well.
Hmm, heh, I could see Sombra take a different approach with Rarity. He does have some power over the minds of others, yes?
If that's the case, what if he uses them to tweak her brain a little? Make it so that the refined lady suddenly gets off on being treated like the lowest, filthiest slut, like an addiction that can't be denied, and her thoughts will always return to Sombra's image. Then afterwards, tell her that it'll become permanent, that the rest of her life will be her looking for some stallion to treat her the worst possible way while Sombra sneers at her in her mind, unless she tells him where the Crystal Heart is.
*reads first paragraph*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT PINKIE PIE YOU FUCKING BASTARD GO FUCK YOURSELF AND DRIVE OF A CLIFF TO A EAGLE THAT RIPS OUT ALLLL YOUR ORGANS WHILE YOU ARE STILL CONSCIOUS EAT YOUR LIVER THEN MAKE YOU EAT THE REST OVER AND OVER FOR ETERNITY!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHA
Hearing that, Sombra stopped for a second and then quickly looked towards his servant, a wicked glee burning in his eyes. The old pony immediately started to say a silent prayer, as he prepared himself for the same fate many of his predecessors had had. But, much to his surprise, the king's answer was given in a calm tone, "Superbly. I am getting close to extracting the location of the Crystal Heart from them. I still need more time. Tomorrow I shall continue, so order the soldiers to prepare the white unicorn, pink earth pony and yellow pegasus. Is that clear, my adviser?"
He will die leave pinkie and fluttershy alone oh and rarity
As she picked up the cake, she took a small bite and said, "Thank you old pony … wherever you are now! I still owe you three snow cones!"
Oh thank God she didn't broke. and didn't believe that her friends will abandoned her or something! Or believing that Celestia and her family will throw her out like an outcast! Thank author
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Before reading this chapter, I thought it was going to be about Sombra raping his next victim. For some odd reason, this threw me completely off guard.
I'm not saying that this is a bad thing or disappointed that this is not the case. In fact, I think it was a rather smart move.
Not only it was a break from that sex stuff, but we get to see as to what is going on with not just the three that were raped, but the others as well.
I can't wait to see what you're going to do next, especially with Pinkie. Truth be told, she's not my most favorite character, but I'm curious as to how she is going to deal with Sombra. I mean, would she willingly have sex with him, and tell him that she doesn't know where the crystal heart is, but the sex was fun anyway, or her mane just turns flat and sobs uncontrollably while he rapes her.
Again, keep up the good work, and one last thing.
Why are you spelling it like you are trying to say hey to somebody? It's supposed to be hay as in H-A-Y, not H-E-Y. You not only did it on this sentence but, several others as well.
6934231 Thank you for the comment and feedback.
My bad on the "hey -> hay" part. Corrected it
Next time, you can just PM me a correction ^_^
Hmm, heh, I could see Sombra take a different approach with Rarity. He does have some power over the minds of others, yes?
If that's the case, what if he uses them to tweak her brain a little? Make it so that the refined lady suddenly gets off on being treated like the lowest, filthiest slut, like an addiction that can't be denied, and her thoughts will always return to Sombra's image. Then afterwards, tell her that it'll become permanent, that the rest of her life will be her looking for some stallion to treat her the worst possible way while Sombra sneers at her in her mind, unless she tells him where the Crystal Heart is.
*reads first paragraph*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT PINKIE PIE YOU FUCKING BASTARD GO FUCK YOURSELF AND DRIVE OF A CLIFF TO A EAGLE THAT RIPS OUT ALLLL YOUR ORGANS WHILE YOU ARE STILL CONSCIOUS EAT YOUR LIVER THEN MAKE YOU EAT THE REST OVER AND OVER FOR ETERNITY!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHA
I will kill you for that author not a good time https://media.tenor.co/images/c66615dd4d532dc274825b5d44324bca/tenor.gif
Rainbow you can't lie to the element of honesty
He will die leave pinkie and fluttershy alone oh and rarity
Oh thank God she didn't broke. and didn't believe that her friends will abandoned her or something! Or believing that Celestia and her family will throw her out like an outcast! Thank author