During the war between Equestria and the Crystal Empire, the mane six get captured. Horrors await, as each of them is 'personally' interrogated by King Sombra.
Well, let's see how it turns out. It was somehow interesting to see how much Twilight suffered but due to the fact that her dreams were so bizarre, it wasn't that frightening.
Final update ... hmm ... Happy ending or plot twist?
Well I am happy with that official ending, though I would love to see alternate endings. I love your writing style simply because is more mature/real (for lack of a better word), it caries build up, great characterization and representation, and the rape wasn't over the top. Most writing styles are plain silly with rape fics, like Celestia's relaxing vacation (which is a total sic fic [she rapes with multiple dicks, while eating pieces of the victims flesh, and then devours their soul]), and basically crap. But yours is more down to earth, with the limited amount of cum before a Stallon needs a rest to recharge his urges (rarity knowing this tried to take it all to spare her friends).
For alternate endings that I am sure others would love to see, I would go back to the chapter where they were escaping and make is so they fail. Or go back to when twilight tried to seduce Sombra and she ends up failing simply because Sombra wanted anal instead of vaginal and he is more then insistent on it, twilight fails to convince him otherwise and then she breaks.
Or simply write a sequel where Sombra goes on the run since he know's he can't hold the crystal empire and uses his magic as a disguise. He goes and get's revenge by raping or killing (depending on his mood) the main sixes family and friends in a frantic attempt to cause despair. Of course this is before Discord's release from prison. Hell, Sombra could fight his way to Tartaurs and try to trick Tirek into teaching him how to steal power. Only Sombra has to do it through rape or sex instead of sucking it dry lol.
Anyway, there are endless stories that could be written. And even if this was it, it was done well, so my hat off to you sire.
7090141 I like the words you used ... "real" . When I write, I usually like to keep the supernatural/magical/scri-fi side of things only limited (more or less) to what the show offers. So, with MLP, when we have magic and different kinds of artifacts, I just stick using those and prefer to write stories which, for the lack of a better word, a human could identify with and scenarios in which a human would feel in peril.
Also, I adore your suggestions. I am not sure about alternate endings, since they can be distracting for new readers, but sequels are a different thing ^_^
At this point I doubt I'd be able to even stand the epilogues.
Well, let's see how it turns out. It was somehow interesting to see how much Twilight suffered but due to the fact that her dreams were so bizarre, it wasn't that frightening.
Final update ... hmm ...
Happy ending or plot twist?
Well I am happy with that official ending, though I would love to see alternate endings. I love your writing style simply because is more mature/real (for lack of a better word), it caries build up, great characterization and representation, and the rape wasn't over the top. Most writing styles are plain silly with rape fics, like Celestia's relaxing vacation (which is a total sic fic [she rapes with multiple dicks, while eating pieces of the victims flesh, and then devours their soul]), and basically crap. But yours is more down to earth, with the limited amount of cum before a Stallon needs a rest to recharge his urges (rarity knowing this tried to take it all to spare her friends).
For alternate endings that I am sure others would love to see, I would go back to the chapter where they were escaping and make is so they fail. Or go back to when twilight tried to seduce Sombra and she ends up failing simply because Sombra wanted anal instead of vaginal and he is more then insistent on it, twilight fails to convince him otherwise and then she breaks.
Or simply write a sequel where Sombra goes on the run since he know's he can't hold the crystal empire and uses his magic as a disguise. He goes and get's revenge by raping or killing (depending on his mood) the main sixes family and friends in a frantic attempt to cause despair. Of course this is before Discord's release from prison. Hell, Sombra could fight his way to Tartaurs and try to trick Tirek into teaching him how to steal power. Only Sombra has to do it through rape or sex instead of sucking it dry lol.
Anyway, there are endless stories that could be written. And even if this was it, it was done well, so my hat off to you sire.
7090141 I like the words you used ... "real" .
When I write, I usually like to keep the supernatural/magical/scri-fi side of things only limited (more or less) to what the show offers. So, with MLP, when we have magic and different kinds of artifacts, I just stick using those and prefer to write stories which, for the lack of a better word, a human could identify with and scenarios in which a human would feel in peril.
Also, I adore your suggestions. I am not sure about alternate endings, since they can be distracting for new readers, but sequels are a different thing ^_^
OMG SPIKE!!! YOU FINALLY ADDED SPIKE!????????!
Also...WHAT DOES'NT KILL YOU MAKES YOU STRONGER!
7101972 Was it depressing all the way to the end? After all, characters fall so they can learn to pick themselves up again
Also, in the chapter, Sombra was represented in the way Twilight envisioned him in her mind.
Thank goodness