During the war between Equestria and the Crystal Empire, the mane six get captured. Horrors await, as each of them is 'personally' interrogated by King Sombra.
I really hope he wins. That may be dark, but damn is it fun watching him be evil. I hope he ends up keeping all the mane 6 as his concubines or something
6975538 I am really glad to hear you are enjoying it and like my 'interpretation' of Sombr. I have to admit, it is also very fun to write him that way.
Great story and job so far, I just hope it has a sequel or Sombra starts to further torment (not torture) them. So by torment I don't mean up the physical torture, I mean up the mental torture. So many fics like this one just keep uping the damage till they are beyond ridiculous, i.e. the first chapter of fics like this typically begin with basic rape and by chapter 5 they are devouring the souls of their victims and cutting off skin and wearing it (no thank you).
By further tormenting them I mean more of a story element thing and mental torture. For instance forcing them to be concubines, or bearing his children, while tricking, threatening, or forcing them into giving up their family members for fun, like Pinkie Pie's sister added to his collection of raped victims or force concubines. And of course his slow but juggernaut conquest of equestria and other mares.
But in the end I would be fine if they all finally escape and get their revenge on him too, anyway you spin this story at this point will still make for a good read. So A+ on this fic so far (good setup, story, rape, and even character development / portrayal). Looking forward to the next chapter.
I am quit amazed that this chapter is so long and good, yet it only takes you almost two weeks to upload. Usually, stories that I read that have chapters about as long as this end up taking months to even upload. Just how do you do it, man? Again, keep up the good work.
6977884 Awesome to hear you like it. I always enjoy getting feedback and new ideas from the readers and this community of by far one of the coolest and friendliest I have ever seen. Regarding the sequel ... let me first finish this story and see how it goes ^_^
6978340 You're kind words always warm by black heart, mwahahahaha (why is there no Sombra emoticon ) To be honest, I have not written of all this in just 2 weeks. I always have a bit of content "in the pipeline".
Thanks to the great feedback I have gotten, I take time to proof-read (although some errors still escape me, doh ) and edit the final form of the chapters a bit before posting.
Well, it's tempting to read this story, but, I'm hesitating because of rape. Last time I've read a rape fic, I got into depression for one and a half week. I don't doubt your story has quality judging by the feed, but I'd rather not have depression now that I'm about to start another semester
Your writing skills have vastly improved. Well done. Well done, indeed. Taking advantage of the Mane Six's varied backgrounds and coming up with varied responses to their situation was a nice touch.
7000806 That is so awesome to hear, especially coming from you! I never realized how complex MLP characters can be until I started writing this. The writers of the show are doing a really great job and they provide us with amazing characters to put in any kind of situations we want
YOU WISH YOU COULD ROT IN TARTRUS BUT WHAT I WILL DO WILL BE SO MUCH WORSE YOU WILL BEG FOR HELL AND I WILL BE SMILING THE ENTIRE TIME DO THAT TO MY PALS PINKIE AND FLUTTERS BITCHES YOU ALL GOING DOWN YOU DO NOT WANT TO TASTE MY RATH REMEMBER THIS IF I WERE VINYL (THE INSANE ONE WHO ESCAPED ALCATRAZ) AND HAD BEEN BEST FRIENDS WITH OCTAVIA AND YOU JUST KILLED OCTAVIA X A MILLION WHAT VINYL WOULD DO TO YOU THAT IS WHAT I WILL DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! https://media.tenor.co/images/3e2d30417e8e11ea6982fb8b14a86e85/tenor.gif
As her legs were being stretched further and further, Pinkie Pie was doing her best to cope with the agony, refusing to give up. "Ok I will tell you. Do you know the muffin pony? I saw him in the pass. I bet he took it."
"such a rarity" - I see what you fucking did there
6973964 You noticed
I really hope he wins. That may be dark, but damn is it fun watching him be evil. I hope he ends up keeping all the mane 6 as his concubines or something
6975538 I am really glad to hear you are enjoying it and like my 'interpretation' of Sombr. I have to admit, it is also very fun to write him that way.
You know what they say: It's good to be bad!
Be sure to stick around for later chapters
6975753 I will indeed
Great story and job so far, I just hope it has a sequel or Sombra starts to further torment (not torture) them. So by torment I don't mean up the physical torture, I mean up the mental torture. So many fics like this one just keep uping the damage till they are beyond ridiculous, i.e. the first chapter of fics like this typically begin with basic rape and by chapter 5 they are devouring the souls of their victims and cutting off skin and wearing it (no thank you).
By further tormenting them I mean more of a story element thing and mental torture. For instance forcing them to be concubines, or bearing his children, while tricking, threatening, or forcing them into giving up their family members for fun, like Pinkie Pie's sister added to his collection of raped victims or force concubines. And of course his slow but juggernaut conquest of equestria and other mares.
But in the end I would be fine if they all finally escape and get their revenge on him too, anyway you spin this story at this point will still make for a good read. So A+ on this fic so far (good setup, story, rape, and even character development / portrayal). Looking forward to the next chapter.
I am quit amazed that this chapter is so long and good, yet it only takes you almost two weeks to upload. Usually, stories that I read that have chapters about as long as this end up taking months to even upload.
Just how do you do it, man?
Again, keep up the good work.
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Awesome to hear you like it. I always enjoy getting feedback and new ideas from the readers and this community of by far one of the coolest and friendliest I have ever seen.
Regarding the sequel ... let me first finish this story and see how it goes ^_^
6978340 You're kind words always warm by black heart, mwahahahaha (why is there no Sombra emoticon )
To be honest, I have not written of all this in just 2 weeks. I always have a bit of content "in the pipeline".
Thanks to the great feedback I have gotten, I take time to proof-read (although some errors still escape me, doh ) and edit the final form of the chapters a bit before posting.
Well, it's tempting to read this story, but, I'm hesitating because of rape. Last time I've read a rape fic, I got into depression for one and a half week. I don't doubt your story has quality judging by the feed, but I'd rather not have depression now that I'm about to start another semester
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Your writing skills have vastly improved. Well done. Well done, indeed. Taking advantage of the Mane Six's varied backgrounds and coming up with varied responses to their situation was a nice touch.
7000806 That is so awesome to hear, especially coming from you!
I never realized how complex MLP characters can be until I started writing this. The writers of the show are doing a really great job and they provide us with amazing characters to put in any kind of situations we want
*Realizes I just read 24,000~ word in the span of about an hour and a half*
FUCK YEAH!
7145594 Glad to hear it was that captivating
YOU WISH YOU COULD ROT IN TARTRUS BUT WHAT I WILL DO WILL BE SO MUCH WORSE YOU WILL BEG FOR HELL AND I WILL BE SMILING THE ENTIRE TIME DO THAT TO MY PALS PINKIE AND FLUTTERS BITCHES YOU ALL GOING DOWN YOU DO NOT WANT TO TASTE MY RATH REMEMBER THIS IF I WERE VINYL (THE INSANE ONE WHO ESCAPED ALCATRAZ) AND HAD BEEN BEST FRIENDS WITH OCTAVIA AND YOU JUST KILLED OCTAVIA X A MILLION WHAT VINYL WOULD DO TO YOU THAT IS WHAT I WILL DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! https://media.tenor.co/images/3e2d30417e8e11ea6982fb8b14a86e85/tenor.gif
Lol pinkie, you can still say a joke at that time
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No llores. Todo saldrá bien al final. ¿O lo será? :)