Yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy! what a crazy coincidence i was just looking over my list of stosries that i wished hadnt been abandoned earlier today and urs was the first one on it! im so glad to see a new chapter! reading this story is always fun!
(even tho i ship ember with ponies, not spike, lol)
anyway im glad u r still writing this, hope to see more soon! or at least sooner, lol
"And Starlight has been in the human world for a few weeks now.” Pinkie turned around, looking at her friends with a mischievous smile. “She keeps saying that she finds the human world very interesting, but I think she’s more interested in somepony...
Juniper Montage? Sunset Shimmer? Lemon Zest? GASP! Not the SIRENS?! (I really don't know who it is...)
I would sincerely hope that the next chapter doesn't take a year to write! It must be done as soon as possible, the ending must be known! But besides that, it's a nice little story with some small grammatical issues here and there, like the author was writing something and changed the wording up but forgot to erase all of the change. Overall a very pleasant read.
Another great chapter! I don't particularly want to wait a year for the next one, but I waited a year for this one and it was definately worth the wait. There are minor grammatical issues here and there but they are definately forgivable.
8382050 Hey, thanks a lot for the corrections, I'll fix those right away. I'll try to not take too long to write next chapter. I already know exactly how I want things to happen, just need to stop being lazy and start writting it down.
HOLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY SHIIIIIIIIIIIIT I KNEW IIIIIIIIIIIIIIT
Yay! Glad you're back.
Yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy! what a crazy coincidence i was just looking over my list of stosries that i wished hadnt been abandoned earlier today and urs was the first one on it! im so glad to see a new chapter! reading this story is always fun!
(even tho i ship ember with ponies, not spike, lol)
anyway im glad u r still writing this, hope to see more soon! or at least sooner, lol
YUUUUS!!!
I Like this chapter as it looks, please continue with the writing!
What a very tasty turn this has taken. Whether it takes another month or another year to get I'll gladly read it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7uW47jWLMiY
Juniper Montage?
Sunset Shimmer?
Lemon Zest?
GASP!
Not the SIRENS?!
(I really don't know who it is...)
I would sincerely hope that the next chapter doesn't take a year to write! It must be done as soon as possible, the ending must be known! But besides that, it's a nice little story with some small grammatical issues here and there, like the author was writing something and changed the wording up but forgot to erase all of the change. Overall a very pleasant read.
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Feel free to point out those mistakes. I would happily fix them.
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With Starlight over there, there would be precisely two ponies on that side. Sunset or bust.
I don't usually go for anthro, but this is pretty good once you get past the occasional spelling/grammar/punctuation issue.
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This is where I ask which pony is Bust, right?
Another great chapter! I don't particularly want to wait a year for the next one, but I waited a year for this one and it was definately worth the wait. There are minor grammatical issues here and there but they are definately forgivable.
Cap.
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I look forward to more of this. Making more oneshots if they come up before next chapter might be best. But I look forward to what comes next.
Please say that Rarity proclaims her love for Sweetie when she wakes up? The build up is perfect for the moment to happen.
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Hey, thanks a lot for the corrections, I'll fix those right away.
I'll try to not take too long to write next chapter. I already know exactly how I want things to happen, just need to stop being lazy and start writting it down.
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You're welcome, and I look forward to it ^_^.
So this be dead then?
I eagerly await more, this has just gotten interesting...