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Cool! I'm reading it if there's clop in the first chapter.
6722901 There's a short scene in this chapter, the clop will properly start in chapter 3.
6722906 Oh, okay. Thanks for the heads up. I see you write quite a bit of clop. I'll be reading quite a few of your stories
uh oh
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Ehhhhhh I tried; I really did. I can't.
6722958 Well, I didn't expect everyone to like this, there are many reasons not to like something. Thanks for trying, sorry this wasn't of your taste.
“Please, don’t use your magic. A lot of this book are too old, getting
A lot of THESE books are too old, you mean ( I assume
6722996 Hey, thanks for that. Will fix it right away.
looking forward to more
6724020 Hopefully I can finish chapter 2 soon.
She would work in some of her designs.
Work ON some of her designs, you mean.
So far, aside from minor spelling errors, I'm pretty interested by this story.
Interesting Story. I can´t wait to see where this will go and what happens next.
6725269 Just hope that what I have planned will be good enough
This interests me. I'll keep my eyes on this.
That cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 1 was perfectly executed by the way.
Would you like an editor? I'd be happy to give you a helping hand.
6728702 I would love it! I'm about to finish chapter 2 and was going to ask at the proofreader group for help.
6728865 Send it to me and I'll go over it for you.
A unique concept and an interesting take on this concept. Tracked!
Interesting story.
Nice story, but there's a lot of grammar things you may want to edit.
That should be "too".
"friend's answer".
First, that period should be a question mark. Second, that line break shouldn't be there. Third, the end of Twilight's sentence is missing a punctuation mark.
I'm pretty sure that should be "in".
That should be capitalized.
Those should be "have" and "these".
I suggest deleting that comma and "a", as well as replace those two words with "senses" and "caught".
Both of those should be "write".
"hear".
Again, I suggest changing that to "in".
I suggest deleting that comma.
That should be a question mark.
I suggest adding "up" between those words.
Either that comma should be a period or the "let's" shouldn't be capitalized.
6752576 Thank you a lot for the corrections. I tried to get an editor for this. The ones I asked never took a look of this chapter.
enjoying this, look forward to next chapter
>> clonedbrony2 I might be able to help you there
6754337 With the editing?
>> clonedbrony2 yup
6755081 I will keep it in mind for the next chapter.
Actually Really good story, I'm loving it! Came for a one shot glance and now I'm hooked and waiting for more. Got it tracked (not quite Favorited because when I favorite an unfinished story it has a bad habit of not ever getting finished).
This be good story, I keep track of it, wait for next chapter to come out. But seriously this is a good story and I can't wait for next chapter, looking forward to seeing where it goes
I'm waiting on the next chapter been looking everyday for the last month
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Same here. This setup is making me moister than an oyster.
7009850 lol that smilie there my sides are gone
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I'm sorry for taking so long, I'm being extremely lazy. About 50% of the chapter has been written but I can't say how long it will take to finish it.
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I appreciate your honesty. I too am a lazy sack of shit.
I really love this concept. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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7032030 IT'S LIT
I guess a lot of people were waiting for this chapter. I can't believe it got Featured!
3rd April 2016!
Edit: Those were 20 minutes of glory that I may never experience again.
Oh frabjous update!
horizon
have
It's Spikey-wikey, not Spikey-wickey :P
Other than that, and the other mistakes already pointed out, I see nothing wrong with this. Just can't wait for Sweetie to realize what's going on.
Maybe Twilight will be persuaded to cast the spell on her to see if the sisters have been soul bound since forever?
7093133 Don't worry, you're not alone. One of my stories got featured for only a brief period of time when I added another chapter to it. I, too, was upset when I no longer saw it in the feature box.
man i love reading this story, all i can say is MORE
Somehow Spike's return spells disaster. Oh well. By the time the next chapter comes out I'll probably forget this fic exists in the first place.
I think it should be was
aww yeah
Yes! I was hoping for another chapter so badly. I hope you don't make us wait as long for the next one.
every chapter of this that i read, just leaves me wanting to read more, its a vicious cycle of addiction
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I guess I'm doing a better job than I thought. Thanks for your words.
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I'll try to write a lot, but no promises.
Did she just initiate a Netflix and chill moment?
Brilliant conflict
10/10 IGN
is this story abandoned?