“Oh Celestia!” Rarity laughed quite unladylike, causing Twilight’s blush to deepen. “Darling, I’m so sorry, but it’s just... *Haha* Oh celestia, if Rainbow Dash found out about this-”
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It seems that the ratio of ponies that were capable of finding their true love was approximately of one every one hundred sixty eight ponies.”
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Good start to things so far. I'm eager to see what happens next.
Cool! I'm reading it if there's clop in the first chapter.
6722901 There's a short scene in this chapter, the clop will properly start in chapter 3.
6722906 Oh, okay. Thanks for the heads up. I see you write quite a bit of clop. I'll be reading quite a few of your stories
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Ehhhhhh I tried; I really did. I can't.
6722958 Well, I didn't expect everyone to like this, there are many reasons not to like something. Thanks for trying, sorry this wasn't of your taste.
“Please, don’t use your magic. A lot of this book are too old, getting
A lot of THESE books are too old, you mean ( I assume
6722996 Hey, thanks for that. Will fix it right away.
looking forward to more
6724020 Hopefully I can finish chapter 2 soon.
She would work in some of her designs.
Work ON some of her designs, you mean.
So far, aside from minor spelling errors, I'm pretty interested by this story.
Interesting Story. I can´t wait to see where this will go and what happens next.
6725269 Just hope that what I have planned will be good enough
This interests me. I'll keep my eyes on this.
That cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 1 was perfectly executed by the way.
Would you like an editor? I'd be happy to give you a helping hand.
6728702 I would love it! I'm about to finish chapter 2 and was going to ask at the proofreader group for help.
6728865 Send it to me and I'll go over it for you.
A unique concept and an interesting take on this concept. Tracked!
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Good start to things so far. I'm eager to see what happens next.