A human veteran of the Griffon Empire's Legion escapes to Equestria with his sister in the wake of a civil war. Together with his sibling, he strives to make the best of his second chance, all while being haunted by the past that follows him.
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Discord?!
-Ru
P.S.
Please tell me Walter at least kicks that dick's ass.
-Ru
I love to see that can't wait to see the author update the story soon I'm loving this story alot
...Discord's having fun, I see. XD
it's Discord or he meet Flutterbat and was unknowingly turned.
Damn it Discord, this is why we can't have nice things
Damn it, Discord.
-Reads authors notes-
Huh... Wait, what?
-Double take-
Homeless?! Dude... I am so sorry to hear that. I hope things get better for you soon. Not because I want to see more of this story, I really mean it. I sincerely hope things get better for you soon. I wish you all the best.
8127307 Thank you good sir, I will try to get my chaotic life in order
Discord
he KNOWS!
I'm so sorry to hear about your situation. I really hope things can work themselves out.
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.......My brain can't even.............
Fantastic job
I like this story and I really hope it continues. I hope your life situation improves soon.
Now that I've had time to think about it, I wanted to write a more detailed comment that's not just "I like this" What I like about this story is how you decided to integrate humans into Equestria in the background of the story instead of just having them show up in the present and even showing how their presence has changed Equestria, from military procedures to the advent of technological advances like magic powered cars to little things like Rainbow being raised by a human. I am really interested to see how things develop especially with the Wham Line (which I won't spoil for people who read this) and how discord is apparently around somehow despite not being mentioned since the history lesson, it also leads me to wonder just how much Equestria has changed. I mean we haven't seen the princesses yet so my brain has immediately gone to thinking that Ponies weren't always anthropomorphic until humans showed up and... yeah my brain does stupid things like that all the time.
If I must be honest the one thing I'm worried about is how you haven't defined if Twilight is a Unicorn or Alicorn yet since you have yet to describe her appearance in story (unless you described her in the karaoke bar back in Canterlot and I missed it). I'll just say that I hope the title card is visually accurate and Twilight is a Unicorn, after all her living situation where she and the other Elements of Harmony all share a house implies that she's just a hero and not royalty, because we've all seen how ponies treat royalty in the show, granted this is very different from the show's universe on a fundamental level.
I'll have to read this again sometime with access to the music since the last time I read it I had the chapters open beforehand so I could read in a place without internet.
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You have no idea how much this comment means to me good sir. For you to give such a detailed breakdown about what you like about this story lets me know which areas I'm doing good in. Thank you so much, this gives me more encouragement :)
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Happy to oblige, I hope your living situation has improved sir.
Another thing I forgot to mention is that I wonder how Fluttershy is going to handle the idea that she apparently slept with Walter or if she'll even bring it up and when.
So is Twilight a Unicorn?
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Yeah she's just a unicorn in this story
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Sweet I really want to read more of this now and I'm definitely wanting to know just how different this world is compared to canon.
Hope your life is going better now too.
Yay that was wonderful!
more plz
Good question.
Also man, I wish you luck in getting things together.
Looks like Walter got himself a Piece of Pinkamina Pie. Mhm.
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actually that was a piece of Flutter Muff