A human veteran of the Griffon Empire's Legion escapes to Equestria with his sister in the wake of a civil war. Together with his sibling, he strives to make the best of his second chance, all while being haunted by the past that follows him.
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Numbah 5?
Another excellent chapter, as usual.:D
Just finished reading the last chapter when my email alerted a new one. This is definitely a different retelling from the previous versions I read.
.........Ahem..........
You wanna Sprite Cranberry
Its great to see you update your story more frequently now
9420192
Every chapter this story just gets more interesting. Please, continue.
After coming back from a fimfic hiatus for around 2 years I thought I would find some interesting stories about. This one piqued my interest real quick, short and simple so far but Im thoroughly enjoying it.
Comments: Love the attention to detail on clothes and facial expressions though each section feels so small. I enjoy a good lengthy read so thats just bias talking, not a fault please make more. The switching of perspectives is a bit jarring at times going into a new person's view, this is definitely a story that has a lot to unfold given all involved but it does feel odd to change to so many different characters than stick to a small pool.
All in all I give it
Out of 10
I look forward to more on this even if it'll be slow, I've got time to wait. Please keep me impressed
Sincerly a fan of the fic,
-Dashie
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Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate the opinions of my readers, because if it wasn't for them and the friends I made on this website I would've have grown as far as I have. I'm glad I chose to learn from the opinions and criticism on this site rather than take it badly and lock myself away.
9424086
Amen brother
This just keeps getting better and better and keeps pulling back for more.I hope this all goes well.
The more I read the more I dread what will come next yet I can't stop reading. Please keep going